Study— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时应更自然流畅，避免语法错误和重复，且句子结构应更清晰。可以先直接回答身份，再补充细节。

例: I am currently a student. I have graduated from university and received an offer to pursue a PhD, so I am preparing for the English language test.

提案: 回答应避免重复词汇，句子应更简洁且连贯。可以使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: I study at home because it is convenient and usually peaceful, although sometimes the neighbors upstairs make some noise.

提案: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够清晰。应更具体说明原因，并用连接词使句子连贯。

例: Yes, my home is a good place to study because I can decide when to start studying. Also, if I feel tired, I can take breaks by playing games, which helps me avoid distractions from noise.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不够清晰。应更准确描述问题并说明影响，避免口语填充词。

例: Yes, I would like my study place to be quieter because the neighbors often make noise, even in the evening. This noise makes me feel anxious, especially when I am practicing speaking and listening.

提案: 回答应避免口语填充词，句子结构应更完整，表达更自然。可以更清楚地说明研究方向和目标。

例: I have received a PhD offer and plan to continue researching biology. Currently, I am studying gut inflammation, and I hope to find a way to treat this disease in the future.

× Now I'm the student I graduate from my university and I have received my PhD offer, so I'm trying to pass the English language test.

✓ Now I'm a student. I graduated from my university and have received my PhD offer, so I'm trying to pass the English language test.

这里“graduate”应该用过去式“graduated”，因为动作已经完成。动词时态错误会影响句子表达的时间准确性。

× Now I'm the student I graduate from my university and I have received my PhD offer, so I'm trying to pass the English language test.

✓ Now I'm a student. I graduated from my university and have received my PhD offer, so I'm trying to pass the English language test.

“the student”应改为“a student”，因为这里是泛指身份，不是特指某个学生。冠词使用错误会影响句子准确表达。

× I study at home, yes, because it it it provides a convenient place for me to study and my home is peaceful and quiet, although the neighbors above me will make some noise.

✓ I study at home, yes, because it provides a convenient place for me to study and my home is peaceful and quiet, although the neighbors above me sometimes make some noise.

“it it it”重复，应删去多余部分。重复词语会影响句子流畅和准确。

× For example, I can choose how how time I get up to study.

✓ For example, I can choose what time I get up to study.

“how how time”重复且用词错误，应改为“what time”。疑问词使用错误会导致句子不通顺。

× Yes, I want to my place become more peaceful.

✓ Yes, I want my place to become more peaceful.

“want to my place become”结构错误，应为“want my place to become”。动词不定式用法错误导致句子结构不正确。

× The neighbors about me always make some noises umm for example, even in the evening.

✓ The neighbors above me always make some noise, for example, even in the evening.

“neighbors about me”应为“neighbors above me”，且“noises”应为不可数名词“noise”。介词和名词单复数错误影响表达准确性。

× The noise make me feel com feel anxious.

✓ The noise makes me feel anxious.

主语“noise”是单数，谓语动词应加-s变为“makes”。主谓一致错误是常见语法问题。

× Actually, I said I got the PhD offer, so I want to continue do research in biology.

✓ Actually, I said I got the PhD offer, so I want to continue doing research in biology.

“continue”后应接动名词“doing”，而不是动词原形。动词搭配错误会导致句子不通顺。

× Umm, and uh, the, and there's a major I'm now studying the gut inflammation.

✓ Umm, and uh, the major I'm now studying is gut inflammation.

句子结构混乱，应明确主语和谓语。这里应为“the major I'm now studying is gut inflammation”。句子结构错误影响理解。

× I think I can one day to treat this disease.

✓ I think I can one day treat this disease.

“can”后直接接动词原形，不需要“to”。动词不定式使用错误导致语法错误。