Study— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is unclear and does not directly respond to the question. Try to give a clear and simple statement about your status as a student or worker. Avoid irrelevant or confusing phrases.

例: I am a student currently studying at university.

提案: Your answer is not understandable and does not address the question. Provide a clear answer stating the name or type of your study place and add a simple detail if possible.

例: I study at Dhaka University, which is a large campus with many facilities.

提案: Your answer is confusing and does not clearly state your opinion. Try to give a direct answer about whether your study place is good, and support it with specific details using linking words.

例: Yes, it is a good place to study because it has many facilities such as a gymnasium and outdoor areas.

提案: Your answer does not address the question about changes in your study place. Try to directly state if you want any improvements or changes and explain why.

例: I would like the study area to have more quiet rooms because it is sometimes noisy.

× I am a student, I'm listening to my passing in two 1024 and long time.

✓ I am a student, and I am preparing to pass the B2 level exam soon.

The original sentence is unclear and structurally incorrect. The phrase 'I'm listening to my passing in two 1024 and long time' does not convey a clear meaning. The correction provides a clear, grammatically correct sentence that fits the context of being a student preparing for an exam.

× How is Spider-Man Article 5 of the three horses for the time that I am going?

✓ I am studying at Spider-Man Article 5, which is one of the three campuses I attend.

The original sentence is nonsensical and does not follow proper sentence structure. The correction clarifies the intended meaning by restructuring the sentence to indicate the place of study and the student's attendance.

× Who else had a good place for sale in the first? Got a lot of facilities. Good morning gymnasium and outdoor. Do you have to study?

✓ It is a good place to study. It has many facilities, including a gymnasium and outdoor areas.

The original sentences are fragmented and unclear. The correction combines the ideas into coherent sentences that properly describe the study place and its facilities.

× I want to go home.

✓ I would like to make some changes to the place where I study.

The answer does not address the question about desired changes to the study place. The correction provides a relevant response that fits the question context.