Study— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you work or are you a student?
受験者
I'm currently a student in university and I'm going to graduate next July. My major is biomedical engineering.
試験官
Where do you study?
受験者
I'm studying in Shandong University, which is considered one of the most prestigious and famous universities in China.
試験官
Is it a good place to study?
受験者
It's a nice place to study, the compass is pretty and facilities are new. Teachers are dedicated and supportive. Students are awesome and always eager to learn.
試験官
Would you like the place where you study to make any changes?
受験者
Well, nothing's perfect, right? I hope school can improve the taste of the canteen. Though it's the second largest canteen in Asia, it still still meet a number of students appetites.
試験官
What are your future study plans?
受験者
I'm planning to apply for a postgraduate program abroad and that's why I'm here taking the IELTS test. You know it's a prerequisite.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you work or are you a student?
スコア: 85.0提案: 回答较为完整，表达清晰，但可以更自然地连接信息，避免句子过于简单。建议使用连接词使回答更流畅。
例: I'm currently a university student majoring in biomedical engineering, and I am going to graduate next July.
Where do you study?
スコア: 90.0提案: 回答内容具体且相关，但可以增加一些细节描述学校的特点，使回答更丰富。
例: I study at Shandong University, which is one of the most prestigious and famous universities in China, known for its strong research programs and beautiful campus.
Is it a good place to study?
スコア: 80.0提案: 回答中有拼写错误（compass应为campus），且句子较为简单，建议使用连接词并丰富细节，使表达更自然流畅。
例: It's a great place to study because the campus is beautiful and the facilities are modern. Moreover, the teachers are dedicated and supportive, and the students are always eager to learn.
Would you like the place where you study to make any changes?
スコア: 70.0提案: 回答中有语法和表达错误，且信息不够连贯。建议注意语法准确性，避免重复，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。
例: Well, nothing is perfect, but I hope the school can improve the taste of the canteen food because, although it is the second largest canteen in Asia, it does not fully satisfy many students' appetites.
What are your future study plans?
スコア: 85.0提案: 回答直接且相关，但“you know”口语化表达在正式考试中应避免。建议使用更正式的表达方式，并适当扩展细节。
例: I plan to apply for a postgraduate program abroad, which is why I am taking the IELTS test, as it is a necessary requirement for admission.
文法
× the compass is pretty and facilities are new.
✓ the campus is pretty and facilities are new.
单词“compass”意为“指南针”，与句意不符，正确应为“campus”，意为“校园”。这是词汇错误，不属于语法错误，但影响表达准确性。
× Though it's the second largest canteen in Asia, it still still meet a number of students appetites.
✓ Though it's the second largest canteen in Asia, it still still meets the appetites of a number of students.
主语是单数“it”，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式“meets”，这是主谓一致错误（语法问题ID 27）。另外，“students appetites”缺少所有格，应为“students' appetites”。
× Though it's the second largest canteen in Asia, it still still meet a number of students appetites.
✓ Though it's the second largest canteen in Asia, it still still meets the appetites of a number of students.
主语“it”是单数，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式“meets”，这是主谓一致错误。
× Though it's the second largest canteen in Asia, it still still meet a number of students appetites.
✓ Though it's the second largest canteen in Asia, it still still meets the appetites of a number of students.
“a number of students appetites”中缺少所有格，应使用“the appetites of a number of students”，这是介词使用错误。
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