Study— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答は直接的で明確ですが、より自然で効果的にするために、文をつなげて流れを良くし、専門分野の説明をもう少し具体的にすると良いでしょう。

例: I'm currently a fourth-year university student specializing in agricultural science, focusing on sustainable farming methods.

提案: 文法の誤り（"there are lot of people" → "there are a lot of people"）を直し、理由を述べる際に接続詞を使って論理的に繋げると良いです。また、"peer"は複数形の"peers"が適切です。

例: I usually study in my laboratory because there are a lot of people there; although it can be a bit noisy, I can get valuable advice from my peers.

提案: "price"は誤用で、正しくは"place"です。文をつなげて一文にまとめ、理由を明確に述べることが必要です。また、"they're a little bit loud"の主語が不明確なので、具体的に説明しましょう。

例: Yes, it's a good place for me to study because I can get advice from others, although it can be a little noisy due to many students.

提案: 文が断片的で意味が伝わりにくいです。文をつなげて、理由を明確に述べるようにしましょう。また、文法的な誤り（"there are lot of students" → "there are a lot of students"）を修正してください。

例: I would like them to add more tables and chairs because there are a lot of students, and currently, there isn't enough space for everyone.

提案: 文法と語彙の誤りが多いです。"ground about horticultural science"や"as I run profoundly my field"は意味が不明瞭なので、より自然で正確な表現に直しましょう。

例: Currently, I'm studying agricultural science at my university, focusing on horticultural science in greenhouses. In the future, I would like to pursue a master's program to deepen my expertise in this field.

× I usually study in my laboratory because there are lot of people.

✓ I usually study in my laboratory because there are a lot of people.

The phrase 'a lot of' requires the article 'a' before 'lot'. Without 'a', the phrase is grammatically incorrect. Adding 'a' corrects the quantifier usage.

× Although this is a little bit loud for me, I can get a lot of advice for my peer.

✓ Although it is a little bit loud for me, I can get a lot of advice from my peers.

The pronoun 'this' is less appropriate here; 'it' refers better to the environment. Also, 'for my peer' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'from' and 'peer' should be plural 'peers' to indicate multiple people.

× Because I can get the advice also.

✓ Because I can get advice as well.

The article 'the' before 'advice' is unnecessary unless referring to specific advice. Also, 'also' is better replaced with 'as well' at the end of the sentence for naturalness.

× They're a little bit loud.

✓ They are a little bit loud.

Contraction 'They're' is acceptable in speech, but for clarity and formality, expanding to 'They are' is better. However, this is minor and optional.

× I'd like it to increase the tables and chairs because there are.

✓ I'd like it to increase the number of tables and chairs because there are many students.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. 'There are' needs an object or complement. Adding 'the number of' clarifies what is to be increased, and completing the reason with 'because there are many students' makes the sentence complete and meaningful.

× There are lot of students and currently.

✓ There are a lot of students currently.

Again, 'a lot of' requires the article 'a'. Also, 'and currently' is incomplete and unnecessary here; placing 'currently' at the end is more natural.

× It it doesn't have enough space.

✓ It doesn't have enough space.

The repetition 'It it' is a typographical error. Removing the extra 'it' corrects the sentence.

× Currently I'm studying at Agriculture science at my university and ground about horticultural science in the greenhouse.

✓ Currently, I'm studying Agricultural Science at my university and working on horticultural science in the greenhouse.

'Agriculture science' should be 'Agricultural Science' as an adjective form. 'Ground about' is incorrect; likely intended 'working on' or 'doing research on'. Adding a comma after 'Currently' improves readability.

× In the future I'd like to go to master program as I run profoundly my field.

✓ In the future, I'd like to go to a master's program to deepen my knowledge in my field.

'Master program' should be 'a master's program' with article and possessive form. 'Run profoundly my field' is incorrect; the intended meaning is likely 'deepen my knowledge in my field'. Adding a comma after 'In the future' improves clarity.