Study— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时语法错误较多，句子结构不完整，表达不够自然。建议使用完整句子，注意时态和主谓一致，避免重复表达。

例: I am a university student majoring in packaging engineering, which I find very interesting.

提案: 回答中存在时态错误和句子结构混乱，缺少连贯性。建议使用现在时态描述当前学习地点，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: I study at Chongqing University of Agriculture and Engineering, which is a beautiful school that makes me feel at home.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，词汇使用不准确（如facilitate应为facilities），句子不连贯。建议注意名词单复数和词汇准确性，使用连接词使表达更自然。

例: Yes, the teachers are excellent and kind. Moreover, the school surroundings are beautiful and cozy, and the facilities are more than adequate.

提案: 回答表达不清晰，语法和词汇错误较多，意思难以理解。建议明确表达想法，使用正确的词汇和句子结构。

例: Yes, I would like the school to offer more clubs and activities so that I can improve my communication skills and abilities in various areas.

提案: 回答断断续续，语法错误严重，表达不完整。建议用完整句子清晰表达未来计划，注意时态和句子连贯。

例: I plan to further my studies in mathematics and decide to go to Hong Kong to learn more about its culture.

× I'm a student studied in university.

✓ I'm a student studying at university.

句子结构错误，'studied'用作过去式不合适，应该用现在分词'studying'表示正在进行的动作。

× My major is packaging engineering is a very interesting major.

✓ My major is packaging engineering, which is a very interesting major.

句子结构错误，两个谓语动词连用导致句子不通顺，需用关系代词'which'连接。

× I studied in Chongqing University of Agriculture and Engineering is a beautiful school that make me feel like home.

✓ I study at Chongqing University of Agriculture and Engineering, which is a beautiful school that makes me feel like home.

时态错误，描述现在的事实应使用现在时；句子结构错误，需用关系代词'which'连接；主谓不一致，'school'单数，谓语用'makes'。

× ...that make me feel like home.

✓ ...that makes me feel like home.

主谓一致错误，'that'指代单数'school'，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式'makes'。

× the surroundings of school is beautiful and cosy,

✓ the surroundings of the school are beautiful and cosy,

主谓一致错误，'surroundings'为复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式'are'；缺少定冠词'the'。

× the surroundings of school is beautiful and cosy,

✓ the surroundings of the school are beautiful and cosy,

缺少定冠词'the'，应为'the school'表示特指。

× and the facilitate was more than.

✓ and the facilities were more than enough.

'facilitate'是动词，正确名词应为'facilities'；'was'与复数不符，应为'were'；表达不完整，补充完整表达。

× the teacher is excellent and kind,

✓ the teachers are excellent and kind,

根据上下文，指多位老师，主语应为复数'teachers'，谓语动词用复数'are'。

× There are many campers in schools that I can improve my communicate skills and ability in any areas.

✓ There are many clubs in school where I can improve my communication skills and abilities in various areas.

'campers'用词错误，应为'clubs'或类似组织；'in schools'改为'in school'更自然；'communicate skills'应为'communication skills'；'ability'应为复数'abilities'；'in any areas'改为'in various areas'更合适。

× I plan to. Further started my math, so I decide to go to Hong Kong. Study about culture.

✓ I plan to further study my major, so I have decided to go to Hong Kong to study culture.

句子结构混乱，断句不当；'started my math'表达错误，应为'study my major'；时态不一致，需统一为将来计划；'Study about culture'应改为不定式形式。