Study— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sắp xếp câu hợp lý hơn để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả. Ví dụ, bạn nên nói rõ bạn vừa làm việc vừa học, và giải thích lợi ích của công việc giảng dạy một cách ngắn gọn.

例: I'm currently working as a lecturer at the University of Transport Technology while pursuing my PhD. This job has many advantages because it allows me to learn continuously while teaching students.

提案: Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên có sự liên kết mạch lạc giữa các ý, ví dụ sử dụng liên từ để nối các câu và làm rõ ý hơn.

例: I am conducting my research at the University of Transport and Communication in Hanoi, which is one of the largest and oldest universities in Vietnam. There, I have received valuable advice and participated in excellent programs.

提案: Bạn cần tránh lỗi phát âm và ngữ pháp, đồng thời sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Hãy cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể hơn về lý do tại sao nơi đó tốt để học tập.

例: The university is an excellent place for research and study because the professors are very supportive. Thanks to their lessons and advice, I have been able to make significant progress in my career.

提案: Bạn nên tránh sử dụng từ ngữ không chính xác và nói lắp. Hãy trình bày ý kiến rõ ràng, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và câu hoàn chỉnh để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

例: I am satisfied with the quality of the educational programs, which are highly recommended. However, I think some of the equipment is outdated and should be replaced.

提案: Bạn cần tránh nói lắp và sử dụng cấu trúc câu rõ ràng hơn. Hãy trình bày kế hoạch tương lai một cách mạch lạc và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả.

例: I plan to complete my PhD degree next year. After that, I hope to work at international universities, thanks to the diploma I will receive from my school.

× I'm lecturer at the University of Transport Technology.

✓ I'm a lecturer at the University of Transport Technology.

The sentence is missing the indefinite article 'a' before 'lecturer'. In English, singular countable nouns usually require an article. Adding 'a' corrects the subject-verb agreement and makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× I'm learning while giving the class for students is that is that job has many advantages.

✓ I'm learning while giving classes to students because that job has many advantages.

The original sentence is confusing and contains redundant phrases. 'Giving the class for students' should be 'giving classes to students' to express the activity properly. Also, 'is that is that job has many advantages' is incorrect and should be replaced with 'because that job has many advantages' to clarify the reason.

× It's one of the biggest and the most ancient University of Vietnam.

✓ It's one of the biggest and most ancient universities in Vietnam.

'University' should be plural 'universities' because 'one of the' refers to a member of a group. Also, 'the most ancient' does not need 'the' before 'biggest' when used in a list. 'In Vietnam' is more appropriate than 'of Vietnam' for location.

× Inside school, I have received many valuable advice and excellent programs.

✓ At the school, I have received much valuable advice and excellent programs.

'Inside school' is incorrect; 'at the school' is the proper prepositional phrase. 'Advice' is an uncountable noun, so 'much' is used instead of 'many'.

× A cross is an an excellent place for doing research and studying at that school.

✓ The campus is an excellent place for doing research and studying at that school.

'A cross' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'The campus'. Also, 'an an' is a repetition error. Correcting to 'The campus is an excellent place...' makes the sentence clear and grammatically correct.

× I have received a lot of help from excellent from good professors.

✓ I have received a lot of help from excellent professors.

The phrase 'from excellent from good professors' is redundant and incorrect. Removing 'from good' clarifies the sentence and corrects the adjective usage.

× Uh, thanks to those lessons and advice, I can progress in my career.

✓ Thanks to those lessons and advice, I have progressed in my career.

The phrase 'I can progress' suggests ability in the present or future, but the context implies past progress. Using present perfect 'have progressed' correctly reflects the completed action affecting the present.

× In terms of quality, I don't have any, uh, problem because, uh, call other education call educational program, say are highly recommended.

✓ In terms of quality, I don't have any problem because all other educational programs are highly recommended.

The original sentence contains unclear and incorrect phrases like 'call other education call educational program, say'. Correcting to 'all other educational programs are highly recommended' clarifies meaning and fixes quantifier and article usage.

× But in terms of equipments, I see some old equipment that need to be replaced.

✓ But in terms of equipment, I see some old equipment that needs to be replaced.

'Equipment' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized as 'equipments'. Also, 'equipment that need' should be 'equipment that needs' to agree with the singular noun.

× I plan to finish my PhD degree the next year and I queue, uh, if I will umm, then I will work for more international universities thanks to the diploma I received from the school.

✓ I plan to finish my PhD degree next year and if I do, then I will work for more international universities thanks to the diploma I received from the school.

'The next year' should be 'next year' without 'the'. 'I queue, uh, if I will umm' is unclear and incorrect; replacing with 'if I do' makes the sentence grammatically correct and clear. The future tense 'will work' is correctly used here.