Study— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够清晰，语法混乱，表达不自然。建议直接回答问题，简洁明了，避免重复和无关内容。

例: I am currently a university student. I plan to work in a shop in the future.

提案: 回答内容混乱，信息不明确。建议直接说明学校名称和地点，句子结构清晰。

例: I study at Gansu University, which is located in Gansu province.

提案: 表达重复且不连贯，建议用连词连接句子，表达观点时提供具体原因，避免重复。

例: I don't think it's a good place to study because the weather is extreme; sometimes it's very cold and other times very hot, which makes studying uncomfortable.

提案: 句子结构不完整，表达不清晰。建议使用完整句子，明确表达希望的改变，并使用连接词。

例: I would like the university to build another library so that students have more quiet places to study.

提案: 回答混乱，表达不连贯。建议清晰列出计划，使用连接词，避免重复。

例: In the future, I plan to study in Shanghai. If that doesn't work out, I will look for a job next year.

× I am a student in university useful and interferes.

✓ I am a student at university.

句子结构混乱，'useful and interferes'无意义，应删除。简化句子使其符合语法和表达习惯。

× I will be I will to be worked in the shop.

✓ I will work in the shop.

'will to be worked'结构错误，正确表达未来计划应使用'will'加动词原形。

× So now I am a student who was a student.

✓ So now I am a student.

句子中时态混乱，'am'和'was'同时出现不合逻辑，应删除多余部分。

× I'm studying Kansu University in teachers in Gaza, probably university Kansas National School from the university and studying.

✓ I'm studying at Kansu University.

介词使用错误，'study at'表示在某学校学习。原句混乱，需简化表达。

× No, I don't think so In a good, good place to study because the place is very cold and sometimes very cold, sometimes it's very hot.

✓ No, I don't think it is a good place to study because sometimes it is very cold and sometimes very hot.

连词使用不当，句子重复且结构混乱，需调整连词和句子结构使其通顺。

× It's made me very terrible to study.

✓ It makes it very difficult for me to study.

代词使用错误，'made me very terrible'表达不当，应使用'it makes it difficult for me'表达困难。

× So I don't think so. The Gansu is a good place to study.

✓ So I don't think Gansu is a good place to study.

代词使用错误，'The Gansu'中冠词不当，应直接使用地名。

× I would like my study please made it make some changes such as I I want they can build up another library to let me study in that and I also.

✓ I would like my study place to make some changes, such as building another library where I can study.

句子结构混乱，语法错误，需调整句子顺序和表达，使其符合英语表达习惯。

× In my future I have plan A and plan D Plan B.

✓ In my future, I have plan A and plan B.

句子中出现无意义的'plan D'，且缺少连词，需简化并正确表达。

× The plan A is I wanna to study in Shanghai and the plane B is I will be worked in the next year worked in the next year and in and my study plan is to change a study place to Shanghai.

✓ Plan A is that I want to study in Shanghai, and plan B is that I will work next year. My study plan is to change my study place to Shanghai.

情态动词和动词形式错误，'wanna to'应为'want to'，'will be worked'应为'will work'，句子结构需调整。