Study— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时句子较为零散，缺乏连贯性。建议使用完整句子并连接信息，使表达更自然流畅。

例: I am a student who just graduated this summer from Hui Institute of Technology, where I majored in civil engineering.

提案: 回答中句子断断续续，缺少连贯的连接词。建议使用连接词如"because"和"also"来使句子更连贯，同时注意语法完整。

例: When I was a high school student, I used to study in the library because there were fewer distractions than in my dormitory, and the study rooms were also great for group projects.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和词汇使用不当，如"focused air atmosphere"不自然。建议使用更准确的表达，并注意句子完整性。

例: Yes, it's a great place to study because it offers a quiet atmosphere and access to a wide range of books and resources. Additionally, I can study with friends or classmates there.

提案: 回答不完整且语句混乱，缺乏清晰表达。建议练习组织语言，确保回答完整且逻辑清晰。

例: Yes, I would like some changes. Since I graduated from high school, I have been studying at home in my hometown for a few months, but sometimes it is hard to concentrate due to distractions.

提案: 回答中断断续续，语法和词汇使用不准确。建议使用完整句子，清晰表达计划和原因。

例: My future study plan is to go to Australia to pursue a Master's degree in engineering because Australia has many great universities, and I hope to gain valuable experience there.

× I have just graduated from Hui Institute of Technology. This summer.

✓ I have just graduated from Hui Institute of Technology this summer.

句子中“this summer”作为时间状语，不能单独成句，应与前句合并，形成完整句子。建议将其放在前句末尾。

× I used to study in library.

✓ I used to study in the library.

“library”前需要加定冠词“the”，表示特指的图书馆。

× The studying rooms are also great for group project.

✓ The studying rooms are also great for group projects.

“project”应使用复数形式“projects”，因为“group projects”指多个小组项目。

× When I was a high school student.

✓ When I was a high school student,

该句为时间状语从句，不能单独成句，应与后文连接，形成完整句子。

× It has focused. Air atmosphere and access to. Wide range of books and resource.

✓ It has a focused atmosphere and access to a wide range of books and resources.

“focused”应修饰“atmosphere”，且“air”不合适；“access to”后应接名词短语，且“resource”应为复数“resources”；句子中断句错误，应合并为完整句。

× Now I am leaving in my home. Hometown.

✓ Now I am living in my hometown.

“leaving”应为“living”，表示居住；“in my home”应改为“in my hometown”，表示家乡。

× After now I. Have studied, studied in my home for a few months and I.

✓ I have studied at home for a few months now.

句子结构混乱，需简化为完整句，表达“我现在已经在家学习几个月了”。

× My future study plan is to go to Australia to be a. Master of engineering.

✓ My future study plan is to go to Australia to get a Master of Engineering degree.

“to be a Master of Engineering”表达不准确，应使用“to get a Master of Engineering degree”表示获得硕士学位。

× And I choose Australia because Australia. Has. Manning. Great universities.

✓ I choose Australia because it has many great universities.

句子断断续续，且“Manning”应为“many”，需合并为完整句。