Study— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时应避免重复和语法错误，句子结构应更清晰自然。可以简洁地表达身份和未来计划。

例: I am currently a senior student majoring in English at Wenzhou University in Zhejiang. I plan to pursue further studies in Hong Kong after graduation.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和发音错误，地名拼写错误，且句子连接不够流畅。应注意时态和冠词的使用，并用连接词使回答更连贯。

例: I study at Wenzhou University in Zhejiang, which is located in the southeast of Zhejiang province. My campus is surrounded by mountains, and there are many other schools and shops nearby, so it can be quite noisy sometimes.

提案: 回答不完整且重复，表达不清晰。应直接回答问题并提供具体理由，避免重复和语法错误。

例: Yes, it is a good place to study because the school has a strong academic atmosphere and two large libraries where students enjoy spending time.

提案: 回答中语法混乱且重复，表达不清晰。应简洁明了地说明想改进的方面并给出具体原因。

例: Overall, I am satisfied with my school, but I think the library's infrastructure could be improved, especially by adding more charging facilities for students' electronic devices.

提案: 回答较为清晰，但表达略显重复。可以更自然地表达未来计划和目标，避免重复词语。

例: After graduation, I plan to continue my studies in Hong Kong, possibly majoring in international teaching or communication, as I hope to improve my language skills.

× I studying at Winter University in Zhejiang.

✓ I am studying at Wenzhou University in Zhejiang.

句子缺少助动词“am”，导致时态错误。现在进行时需要用“am/is/are + 动词-ing”结构。建议在“studying”前加上“am”。

× It is located southeast of Dejiang province.

✓ It is located southeast of Zhejiang province.

地名拼写错误，应为“Zhejiang”而非“Dejiang”。此外，介词“of”使用正确，无需更改。

× My school surrounded by mountains and there are many other schools and shops around.

✓ My school is surrounded by mountains, and there are many other schools and shops around.

缺少系动词“is”，导致句子结构不完整。被动语态需要“be动词 + 过去分词”，此处应加“is”。

× The main idea is the main idea is they are there's my school filled with academic atmosphere and because there are two large library students enjoy studying there and the the.

✓ The main idea is that my school is filled with an academic atmosphere because there are two large libraries, and students enjoy studying there.

句子结构混乱，重复且缺少连接词。应使用“that”引导宾语从句，且“library”应为复数“libraries”，并补充必要的连词使句子通顺。

× We are quite satisfied with my school overall but when aspect I want to say to improve which is the infrastructure of the library is the main idea as the main reason is they are they are they are is not equipped with with charging facilities.

✓ We are quite satisfied with my school overall, but one aspect I want to mention for improvement is the infrastructure of the library, as it is not equipped with charging facilities.

句子结构混乱，代词使用不当，重复且缺少连词。应简化句子，使用正确的代词和连接词，使表达清晰。

× there are two large library students enjoy studying there

✓ there are two large libraries, and students enjoy studying there

“library”应为复数“libraries”，因为前面有“two”，表示两个。

× the infrastructure of the library is the main idea as the main reason is they are they are they are is not equipped with with charging facilities.

✓ the infrastructure of the library is the main idea as the main reason is it is not equipped with charging facilities.

代词“they”指代单数“infrastructure”，应使用“it”。

× I plan to go to Hong Kong for further studies. Maybe I will choose some major, some major like international teaching or international communication.

✓ I plan to go to Hong Kong for further studies. Maybe I will choose a major, like international teaching or international communication.

“major”前应使用不定冠词“a”，表示某个专业。

× My major is English and and I plan to go to Hong Kong for further studies.

✓ My major is English, and I plan to go to Hong Kong for further studies.

句子中“and and”重复，应删除一个“and”。

× My school surrounded by mountains and there are many other schools and shops around.

✓ My school is surrounded by mountains, and there are many other schools and shops around.

缺少系动词“is”，导致句子结构不完整。被动语态需要“be动词 + 过去分词”，此处应加“is”。