Study— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is relevant but could be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence and avoid redundancy. For example, say "I'm a student currently improving my English vocabulary."

例: I'm a student currently improving my English vocabulary to communicate better.

提案: Your answer is a bit long and unclear. Use linking words to connect ideas and be specific. For example, "I study at an institute about 2-3 kilometres from my village, where I take an English spoken course to improve my communication skills."

例: I study at an institute 2-3 kilometres from my village, where I take an English spoken course to improve my communication skills.

提案: Your answer is relevant but incomplete and slightly repetitive. Use linking words and complete your thoughts. For example, "Yes, it's a good place to study because the teachers are very supportive, and they help me improve my communication skills."

例: Yes, it's a good place to study because the teachers are very supportive, and they help me improve my communication skills.

提案: Your answer is too long and repetitive. Use linking words to make it coherent and concise. For example, "I don't think any changes are needed because the institute is conveniently located near my city, has good facilities like air conditioning and fans, and the building is well maintained."

例: I don't think any changes are needed because the institute is near my city, has good facilities like air conditioning, and the building is well maintained.

提案: Your answer is relevant but could be clearer and more structured. Use linking words and explain your reasons. For example, "In the future, I want to become a Chartered Accountant. Since I completed my secondary education in my community, I plan to go abroad for further studies to gain better opportunities."

例: In the future, I want to become a Chartered Accountant. Since I completed my secondary education locally, I plan to study abroad for better opportunities.

× I'm a student, Currently I am working on my English skills to enhance my vocabulary.

✓ I'm a student. Currently, I am working on my English skills to enhance my vocabulary.

The original sentence is a run-on sentence lacking proper punctuation. Adding a period and a comma improves clarity and sentence structure.

× I'm studying in the institute which is nearby city about two 2-3 kilometres from my village and I'm studying English course English spoken course for enhance my vocabulary because I need help to communicate with people.

✓ I'm studying at an institute which is near the city, about 2-3 kilometres from my village, and I'm taking an English spoken course to enhance my vocabulary because I need help communicating with people.

Use 'at' for institutions, 'near' instead of 'nearby' as an adjective, and 'taking' an English course is correct. Also, 'to enhance' is the correct infinitive form here. The sentence is restructured for clarity.

× Yes, I think this institution is good place to study because the teachers of this institute is very good and they helped me a lot in my work and I think it's good to know about the communication skills and.

✓ Yes, I think this institution is a good place to study because the teachers of this institute are very good and they have helped me a lot in my work. I think it's good to learn about communication skills.

'Good place' needs an article 'a'. 'Teachers' is plural, so the verb should be 'are'. 'Helped' should be 'have helped' to indicate ongoing relevance. The sentence is also completed properly.

× I don't think so there is any need of changing this place because the place is already good and it is nearby my city and their building is very good and also ACS and fans are available in this institute.

✓ I don't think there is any need to change this place because it is already good and it is near my city. The building is very good and also AC and fans are available in this institute.

'I don't think so' is incorrect; 'I don't think' is correct. 'Need of changing' should be 'need to change'. 'Nearby' is an adjective, 'near' is the correct preposition here. 'Their building' should be 'the building'. 'ACS' is likely a typo for 'AC' (air conditioning). Sentence is split for clarity.

× In future, I want to become a CA because I have done my secondary education in community so I want to go abroad for my further studies.

✓ In the future, I want to become a CA because I have completed my secondary education in the community, so I want to go abroad for my further studies.

'In future' should be 'In the future'. 'Have done' is better as 'have completed' for education. 'In community' needs 'the community'. Comma added before 'so' for sentence clarity.