Study— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答较为完整且自然，但可以更简洁，避免冗余。例如，去掉“prestigious university”重复信息，直接说明专业和学校位置即可。

例: I'm a student majoring in applied linguistics at a university in southern China.

提案: 回答信息丰富，但句子较长且有些重复。建议使用连接词使表达更连贯，同时避免重复“prestigious university”。

例: I study at Hwa Chong University in southern China, which is famous for its strong academic programs. I enjoy it because the professors are very supportive.

提案: 回答中有语法错误（provide应为provides），句子未完整，且表达不够流畅。建议注意语法和句子完整性，使用连接词使内容更连贯。

例: Yes, it is a great place to study because the professors are supportive both academically and personally. For instance, they help students with coursework and college life. Moreover, the university provides a quiet and comfortable environment.

提案: 回答清晰且具体，表达自然。可以稍微丰富细节，增加连接词使表达更流畅。

例: Yes, I would like some changes. Currently, I live in the school dormitory outside the campus, which I find unsafe and inconvenient. For example, since the area is quite isolated, it can be risky to return late at night.

提案: 回答内容丰富且表达流畅，建议可以加入更多具体细节或理由，使答案更具说服力。

例: I'm going to graduate next year and plan to apply for PhD programs in countries like New Zealand and Australia because studying abroad will provide valuable international experience and broaden my academic horizons.

× Yes, it is definitely a good place to study before.

✓ Yes, it is definitely a good place to study.

句中使用了“before”，但句意是描述现在的情况，使用“before”不合适，应去掉以符合现在时态的表达。

× Moreover, the university provide a quiet and comfortable.

✓ Moreover, the university provides a quiet and comfortable environment.

主语“the university”是单数，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式“provides”。此外，句子不完整，缺少名词“environment”来完成表达。