Study— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you work or are you a student?
受験者
Actually, I'm a student in public high school and finally I'm a senior. I'm going to graduate by next year, God willing.
試験官
Where do you study?
受験者
As I mentioned before, I study in a public high school in Saudi Arabia, exactly in Mecca, which is a quiet and calm city that helps me focusing and study.
試験官
Is it a good place to study?
受験者
Yes, it's good to study there. It offers an ideal setting for academic pursuits.
試験官
Would you like the place where you study to make any changes?
受験者
Honestly, it should be better. We require highly qualified teachers to help us to grow our land and improve development.
試験官
What are your future study plans?
受験者
I'm considering studying for the aisles to pursue higher education in political science as I'm deeply interested in this measure and aspire to protect my country.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you work or are you a student?
スコア: 75.0提案: حاول أن تجعل إجابتك أكثر إيجازًا وطبيعية، وابتعد عن العبارات الدينية التي قد لا تكون مناسبة في السياق الأكاديمي. كما يمكنك استخدام جمل أكثر بساطة ووضوحًا.
例: I am currently a senior student at a public high school, and I plan to graduate next year.
Where do you study?
スコア: 80.0提案: حاول استخدام كلمات ربط لتوضيح العلاقة بين الأفكار، وكن أكثر دقة في التعبير عن الفوائد التي تحصل عليها من المكان. كما تجنب التكرار في الإجابة.
例: I study at a public high school in Mecca, Saudi Arabia. The city is quiet and calm, which helps me concentrate better on my studies.
Is it a good place to study?
スコア: 70.0提案: حاول توسيع إجابتك بإضافة تفاصيل محددة تدعم رأيك، واستخدم كلمات ربط لجعل الإجابة أكثر ترابطًا.
例: Yes, it is a good place to study because the environment is peaceful and the facilities are well-equipped, which creates an ideal setting for learning.
Would you like the place where you study to make any changes?
スコア: 65.0提案: حاول أن تكون أكثر تحديدًا في اقتراحاتك، واستخدم جمل مترابطة توضح كيف يمكن لهذه التغييرات أن تؤثر إيجابيًا على الطلاب والمجتمع.
例: Yes, I think the school could improve by hiring more qualified teachers, which would help students learn better and contribute to the country's development.
What are your future study plans?
スコア: 60.0提案: حاول أن تكون أكثر وضوحًا ودقة في التعبير عن خططك المستقبلية، وتجنب الأخطاء اللغوية أو الكلمات غير المناسبة. استخدم جمل مترابطة وواضحة.
例: I plan to pursue higher education in political science because I am passionate about this field and want to contribute to my country's progress.
文法
× which is a quiet and calm city that helps me focusing and study
✓ which is a quiet and calm city that helps me focus and study
The verb 'helps' should be followed by the base form of the verb 'focus' rather than the '-ing' form 'focusing'. After verbs like 'help', the base form is used to indicate purpose or result.
× I'm considering studying for the aisles to pursue higher education in political science as I'm deeply interested in this measure and aspire to protect my country
✓ I'm considering studying abroad to pursue higher education in political science as I'm deeply interested in this field and aspire to protect my country
The phrase 'studying for the aisles' is incorrect and unclear. The correct phrase is 'studying abroad' when referring to studying in another country. Also, 'this measure' is incorrect; the correct word is 'this field' when referring to an area of study.
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