Study— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you work or are you a student?
受験者
Umm actually now I'm just a high school student at 12th grade and now I'm specialized in natural stream which including mathetic, physics and chemistry subject. I find this kind of UMM subject is very interesting because it make me understand more about how the world work.
試験官
Where do you study?
受験者
Actually, I'm study at Lombard High School, which is one of the most well known for high schools in Hanoi, The capital of Vietnam is earned reputation for a lot of practical activities and academic reputation which make me feel very enjoyed.
試験官
Is it a good place to study?
受験者
Umm, well, I think it still depends on, umm, what you consider important. Why? On the why, on the one hand, the quality of the teacher and academic performance is quite good. On the other hand, the facilities of the school is kind of outdated and rundown, so it can affect the overall, uh, school performance.
試験官
Would you like the place where you study to make any changes?
受験者
Well, hope that's a facility in my school can be improved. Umm in my school there's a lot of device and equipment like computers or lab equipment are very old and outdated, which makes students feel so difficult to learn. So I hope that in the future they can improve this kind of in order to improve overall.
試験官
What are your future study plans?
受験者
Actually, not much, umm, I'm going to have a entrance exam. So I think that I'm gonna repair a lot of knowledge for it. So I hope that I can, uh, achieve what I, what I want in the future.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you work or are you a student?
スコア: 65.0提案: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và phát âm sai. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, chính xác và tránh lặp từ như 'umm'.
例: I am currently a 12th-grade high school student specializing in the natural sciences, including mathematics, physics, and chemistry. I find these subjects very interesting because they help me understand how the world works.
Where do you study?
スコア: 60.0提案: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Tránh lỗi sai về thì và giới từ, đồng thời nên chia câu rõ ràng hơn.
例: I study at Lombard High School, which is one of the most well-known high schools in Hanoi, the capital of Vietnam. It has a strong reputation for practical activities and academic excellence, which I really enjoy.
Is it a good place to study?
スコア: 70.0提案: Bạn nên giảm bớt các từ ngập ngừng như 'umm' và 'uh', đồng thời sử dụng liên từ phù hợp để câu trả lời mạch lạc và tự nhiên hơn.
例: I think it depends on what you consider important. On one hand, the teachers are good and the academic performance is strong. However, the school's facilities are outdated, which can affect the overall learning experience.
Would you like the place where you study to make any changes?
スコア: 65.0提案: Bạn cần sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và chính xác hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sắp xếp ý rõ ràng, sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời trôi chảy.
例: I hope the facilities at my school can be improved. Many devices, such as computers and lab equipment, are old and outdated, which makes learning difficult. Therefore, I hope they will upgrade these to improve the overall learning environment.
What are your future study plans?
スコア: 60.0提案: Bạn nên tránh sử dụng từ lóng và ngập ngừng, đồng thời sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và câu hoàn chỉnh để trả lời rõ ràng hơn.
例: I plan to prepare for an entrance exam soon. I will study hard to improve my knowledge, and I hope to achieve my goals in the future.
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