Study— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you work or are you a student?
受験者
Umm, I'm currently I'm a student and recently I finished my graduation of university. Now I stay at home by uh, independent and I want to keep, I want to keep studying because I want improve my skill and umm, I can.
試験官
Where do you study?
受験者
And now I living on young and I study at home in my room, in my bedroom there have a desk and chair.
試験官
Is it a good place to study?
受験者
Oh yes, it's a perfect place to study. Umm, there is very quiet, never remember. Uh, the environment can improve study quality and umm and.
試験官
Would you like the place where you study to make any changes?
受験者
Oh I think I need better lamp because my lamp is not not too light. It's it make me room so dark. I think it's bad. It's badly for my eyes.
試験官
What are your future study plans?
受験者
Hmm in this years I think I I still studying in my room as next years I want umm I'm planning to find a university to to keep studying.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you work or are you a student?
スコア: 60.0提案: 回答时应避免重复和语法错误，句子结构应更清晰。可以直接说明自己是学生，最近毕业，计划继续学习以提升技能。
例: I am currently a student. I recently graduated from university, and now I am staying at home independently. I plan to continue studying to improve my skills.
Where do you study?
スコア: 55.0提案: 回答应更自然流畅，避免语法错误。应直接回答学习地点，并描述环境细节。
例: I study at home in my bedroom. There is a desk and a chair where I usually do my work.
Is it a good place to study?
スコア: 50.0提案: 回答应更连贯，避免语法错误和不完整句子。可以说明环境安静，有助于提高学习效率。
例: Yes, it is a perfect place to study because it is very quiet. This peaceful environment helps me concentrate better.
Would you like the place where you study to make any changes?
スコア: 60.0提案: 回答应更简洁，语法正确。可以说明灯光不足影响视力，希望换更好的灯。
例: I would like to have a better lamp because the current one is too dim. It makes the room dark and strains my eyes.
What are your future study plans?
スコア: 55.0提案: 回答应更清晰，避免重复和语法错误。可以说明今年继续在家学习，明年计划申请大学继续深造。
例: This year, I plan to continue studying in my room. Next year, I intend to apply to a university to continue my studies.
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