Study— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you work or are you a student?
受験者
Honestly, I'm a student at high school which is located on Hong Yue St. and I'm going to grade 12.
試験官
Where do you study?
受験者
Like until I'm study in in high school which is located on Huang Yu St.
試験官
Is it a good place to study?
受験者
Absolutely yes because the the environment is very cool very good. My school one have all equipment to have students study well.
試験官
Would you like the place where you study to make any changes?
受験者
Honestly, I'm a bit confused about whether I want to change anything at my study place because it's perfect to study.
試験官
What are your future study plans?
受験者
So my goal is that I want to aim a good score at all subjects I study and then I'm going to be an excellent student.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you work or are you a student?
スコア: 70.0提案: Câu trả lời của bạn nên ngắn gọn và trực tiếp hơn, tránh dùng từ không cần thiết như "Honestly" và nên sửa lỗi ngữ pháp như "I'm going to grade 12" thành "I'm in grade 12" để tự nhiên hơn.
例: I'm a high school student currently in grade 12 at a school on Hong Yue Street.
Where do you study?
スコア: 50.0提案: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ thừa, bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp và rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng cấu trúc đúng.
例: I study at a high school located on Huang Yu Street.
Is it a good place to study?
スコア: 60.0提案: Bạn nên tránh lặp từ như "the the" và dùng từ phù hợp hơn thay vì "cool" để mô tả môi trường học tập. Ngoài ra, câu nên rõ ràng và có cấu trúc tốt hơn.
例: Yes, it's a great place to study because the environment is quiet and comfortable, and the school provides all the necessary equipment for students.
Would you like the place where you study to make any changes?
スコア: 65.0提案: Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng hơn thay vì nói mơ hồ như "a bit confused". Ngoài ra, tránh dùng từ không cần thiết như "Honestly" và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp để câu tự nhiên hơn.
例: I don't think I would like to change anything because my study place is already perfect for me.
What are your future study plans?
スコア: 70.0提案: Bạn nên dùng câu ngắn gọn, tránh dùng từ không cần thiết như "So" và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp để câu rõ ràng hơn. Nên thêm liên từ để câu mạch lạc hơn.
例: My goal is to achieve good scores in all my subjects so that I can become an excellent student.
文法
× Like until I'm study in in high school which is located on Huang Yu St.
✓ I am still studying in high school which is located on Huang Yu St.
The original sentence uses 'I'm study' which is incorrect. The correct present continuous form is 'I am studying'. Also, 'Like until' is unnecessary and confusing, so it is removed for clarity.
× My school one have all equipment to have students study well.
✓ My school has all the equipment for students to study well.
The subject 'My school' is singular, so the verb should be 'has' instead of 'have'. Also, 'all equipment' should be preceded by 'the' to specify the equipment, and 'to have students study well' is better expressed as 'for students to study well'.
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