Study— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误，如"I currently studying"应为"I am currently studying"，且句子较长且不够连贯。建议简化句子结构，使用正确时态，并避免重复表达。

例: I am currently a full-time postgraduate student in China, majoring in law. My studies are challenging but rewarding, and I am excited to graduate soon.

提案: 回答语法错误较多，句子不完整且表达不清晰。建议使用完整句子，明确地点和学校名称，避免语法错误。

例: I study at Guangdong University of Foreign Studies in Guangzhou, China. It is a well-known and highly ranked university.

提案: 回答中有过多的语气词"uh"，影响流畅度。句子结构不够清晰，建议减少语气词，使用连词使句子更连贯。

例: Yes, absolutely. The school is well developed, the professors are skilled and knowledgeable, and the environment is very pleasant.

提案: 语法错误明显，如"Our school have"应为"Our school has"。表达不够清晰，建议使用更准确的词汇和句式，避免重复。

例: Our school has a long history, so many buildings and facilities are quite old. I hope they can renovate the dormitories soon.

提案: 回答中有重复词汇"I I"，语法错误如"continue study"应为"continue studying"。建议注意语法和表达的准确性。

例: I don't plan to continue studying because I have learned enough during my postgraduate studies. I am preparing to start working after graduation.

× I currently studying as a full time postgraduate student in China and my major is law and I'm about to graduate so.

✓ I am currently studying as a full-time postgraduate student in China, and my major is law. I'm about to graduate.

句子缺少助动词“am”，导致时态错误。现在进行时需要用“am/is/are + 动词-ing”结构。建议在“currently”后加上“am”以构成正确的现在进行时。

× My postgraduate life is quite challenging and rewarding, but I'm also very exciting.

✓ My postgraduate life is quite challenging and rewarding, but I'm also very excited.

“exciting”是形容事物使人感到兴奋的，而“excited”是形容人的感受。这里应使用“excited”来表达自己的情绪。

× I study in China Guangzhou on my school and is Guangdong University of Foreign Studies which is a really famous and highly ranked school in China which full of.

✓ I study in Guangzhou, China, at my school, Guangdong University of Foreign Studies, which is a really famous and highly ranked school in China.

“on my school”用法错误，正确应为“at my school”。另外，句子结构混乱，需调整语序和标点使句子通顺。

× I study in China Guangzhou on my school and is Guangdong University of Foreign Studies which is a really famous and highly ranked school in China which full of.

✓ I study in Guangzhou, China, at my school, Guangdong University of Foreign Studies, which is a really famous and highly ranked school in China.

句子结构混乱，缺少主谓一致，且“which full of”不完整，需删去或补充完整。建议调整句子结构，使其符合英语表达习惯。

× Yes, uh, absolutely, because the school is very, uh, well developed and the professors are really skilled and educated in the environment is very nice.

✓ Yes, absolutely, because the school is very well developed, the professors are really skilled and educated, and the environment is very nice.

句子中“and educated in the environment is very nice”结构不正确，缺少连接词，导致语义不清。应使用逗号和连词“and”连接多个并列成分。

× Our school have a very long history, so many infrastructures and facilities are quite old and the dormitory facilities a little bit old, so I want them to switch them.

✓ Our school has a very long history, so many infrastructures and facilities are quite old, and the dormitory facilities are a little bit old, so I want them to replace them.

主语“school”是单数，谓语动词应使用“has”而非“have”。另外，“switch them”用法不当，应使用“replace them”表示更换。

× I I don't want to continue study because I think I learned enough to during my postgraduate studies and I'm preparing for work since I finished my degree.

✓ I don't want to continue studying because I think I have learned enough during my postgraduate studies, and I'm preparing for work since I finished my degree.

“continue study”应为“continue studying”，动词后需用动名词形式。过去时“learned”在此处应使用现在完成时“have learned”，表示从过去到现在的经历。