Study— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时语法和用词需更准确，例如“measuring”应为“majoring”。建议简洁明了地表达专业变更，避免冗长。

例: I'm currently a student at Zhongshan Medical University. I initially majored in Applied Foreign Language but transferred to the Psychology department in my second year.

提案: 回答内容丰富，但表达稍显重复，如“if I want and if I could”意义重复。建议使用更自然的表达，避免冗余。

例: I study at Zhongshan Medical University in Taichung City, which is famous for its delicious food and numerous night markets that I often visit.

提案: 语法错误较多，如“it don't provide”应为“it doesn't provide”。回答重复“不是一个好地方”两次，建议简洁表达并用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: Honestly, I don't think it's a good place to study because the school doesn't have a library. Therefore, I usually study at nearby cafes like Louisa or Starbucks.

提案: 表达中有语法和用词错误，如“significant in for any universities”。建议简化句子结构，使用更准确的表达。

例: As I mentioned before, I believe the university should build a library because it's essential for studying throughout the semester, not just during exams.

提案: 回答内容清晰，但句子结构稍显笨拙。建议使用更自然的连接词和表达方式，使句子更流畅。

例: I plan to pursue a master's degree abroad, especially in the UK, as it will help me improve my knowledge and skills and open up more opportunities.

× I started my university in the department of Applied Foreign Language, but I transferred to psychology department in my second year, so I'm measuring in psychology now.

✓ I started my university in the department of Applied Foreign Language, but I transferred to the psychology department in my second year, so I'm majoring in psychology now.

“psychology department”前缺少定冠词“the”，因为特指某个系。且“measuring”应为“majoring”，表示主修专业。

× It's a wonderful city since it has lots of delicious food and there's a lot of night markets, so I can go there every night if I want and if I could.

✓ It's a wonderful city since it has lots of delicious food and there are a lot of night markets, so I can go there every night if I want and if I can.

“there's a lot of night markets”中“there's”是“there is”的缩写，后面接复数名词应使用“there are”。“if I could”时态和语境不符，应为“if I can”。

× To be honest, I don't think it's a good place to study because there's a big drawback in my school that it don't provide a library.

✓ To be honest, I don't think it's a good place to study because there's a big drawback in my school that it doesn't provide a library.

主语“it”是第三人称单数，谓语动词应使用“doesn't”而非“don't”。

× I intend to pursue masters degree abroad like especially in the UK and for me it can advance my knowledge and skills and can open up more opportunities for me.

✓ I intend to pursue a master's degree abroad, especially in the UK, because it can advance my knowledge and skills and open up more opportunities for me.

“pursue masters degree”缺少冠词“a”，且“like especially”用法不当，应直接用“especially”。“for me”位置不合适，改为“because”引导原因状语。