Study— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答较为自然，但有些句子结构重复，且部分表达不够准确。建议避免重复使用“I am working”，并注意时态和语法的准确性。

例: I am currently working as a designer in a company, which is related to my college major. I really enjoy my job because it allows me to be creative.

提案: 回答内容丰富，但缺少直接回答“在哪里学习”的信息。建议开头直接回答地点，然后再补充专业相关内容。

例: I studied industrial design at XYZ University. This major is interesting because it allows me to share ideas and be creative while solving various problems.

提案: 回答较完整，但有语法错误，如“they're included”应为“it includes”。建议注意主谓一致和表达准确性。

例: Yes, my university is a great place to study. It is very large and includes many different majors. Students from various countries and cultures come together to learn their subjects.

提案: 表达不够清晰，语法错误较多，如“used to”应为“am used to”，“a change life”应为“a life with changes”。建议简化句子结构，表达更准确。

例: Actually, I don't want any changes at my university because I am used to the current environment. I prefer a stable and regular life.

提案: 回答表达不够流畅，有语法错误，如“don't make”应为“haven't made”，“give it as consideration”表达不自然。建议使用更自然的表达方式。

例: I am not sure about my future study plans because I am currently working. I hope to work for a reputable company where I can continue my creative work, but I will consider further studies in the future.

× It's my college major and now become my job.

✓ It's my college major and now has become my job.

句子中主语是第三人称单数，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式。这里“become”应改为“has become”，表示现在完成时，符合语境。

× I started industrial design, which is related to my current job.

✓ I studied industrial design, which is related to my current job.

“started industrial design”表达不准确，应该用“studied”表示学习专业。

× It is an interesting major which allows you to share your ideas and be more creative.

✓ It is an interesting major that allows you to share your ideas and be more creative.

关系代词“which”用于限定性定语从句时，口语中更常用“that”，使句子更自然。

× Yes, my university is really a good place to study. It is very large and they're included a lot of majors there.

✓ Yes, my university is really a good place to study. It is very large and it includes a lot of majors there.

“they're included”用法错误，应为“it includes”，主语与谓语不一致。

× People from different countries and different cultures come together and learn what they major in.

✓ People from different countries and different cultures come together and learn what they are majoring in.

“learn what they major in”表达不完整，应该用进行时态“are majoring in”表示正在学习的专业。

× Well, actually I don't like the changes that's in my study because I have used to the situation and environment where I study and live.

✓ Well, actually I don't like the changes that are in my study because I am used to the situation and environment where I study and live.

“changes”是复数，关系代词应为“that are”；“have used to”错误，应为“am used to”，表示习惯于。

× I like regular life rather than a change life, so.

✓ I like a regular life rather than a changing life.

“change life”用法错误，应为“changing life”表示变化的生活；同时“a”应加在“regular life”前。

× Well, I'm not sure about my future studies because I'm working now and I don't make any plans for the future study.

✓ Well, I'm not sure about my future studies because I'm working now and I haven't made any plans for future study.

“don't make”时态不正确，应使用现在完成时“haven't made”表示到目前为止没有做计划。

× I plan to go to a reputable company where I can continue to do my creative job, but for the study I think I would give it as consideration.

✓ I plan to go to a reputable company where I can continue to do my creative job, but for study, I think I would give it some consideration.

“give it as consideration”表达错误，应为“give it some consideration”；“for the study”中“the”不必要，应为“for study”。