Study— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够自然，语法错误较多，表达不完整。建议使用完整句子，明确表达身份和地点。

例: I am currently a student studying in Guangzhou.

提案: 回答不够连贯，句子结构混乱，表达意图不清晰。建议简洁明了地回答问题，并用连接词衔接细节。

例: I study in Guangzhou, which is a beautiful city. I hope to live and work there in the future.

提案: 表达含糊且有语法错误，逻辑不清晰。建议直接回答问题，避免矛盾表达，并用具体理由支持观点。

例: Yes, I think it is a good place to study because the teachers are very supportive and the students are friendly.

提案: 回答不完整且语法错误严重，缺乏具体细节。建议明确表达希望改进的方面，并给出具体例子。

例: Yes, I hope the school can improve its library facilities to provide more resources for students.

提案: 回答语无伦次，语法和词汇错误多，表达不清。建议用简单句表达未来计划或不确定性，并说明原因。

例: I am a second-year university student, and I am not sure about my future study plans yet, but I hope to decide soon.

× And now a student and I'm study in Guangzhou.

✓ I am a student now and I study in Guangzhou.

句子结构混乱，缺少主语和谓语的正确搭配。应明确表达“我现在是学生，我在广州学习”。

× I'm study in Guangzhou.

✓ I'm studying in Guangzhou.

动词study后接现在进行时应使用动词的-ing形式，表示正在进行的动作。

× That's a beautiful city that I want to. Walk there in the future.

✓ That's a beautiful city where I want to walk in the future.

句子结构不完整，断句错误。应将“walk there”与前句连贯，表达想在那个城市散步的意思。

× But even though it's no good school in China, but I think they're the teachers and the students are very nice.

✓ Even though there are no good schools in China, I think the teachers and students are very nice.

“But”和“even though”不能同时使用，且“no good school”应为复数形式。应去掉“but”，调整句子使其通顺。

× I hope the school can make some changes to better in the future.

✓ I hope the school can make some changes to be better in the future.

“to better”缺少动词“be”，导致表达不完整。应补充“be”使句子完整。

× For example, I think my school can. Provide some better.

✓ For example, I think my school can provide some better facilities.

句子断裂，缺少宾语。应补充具体内容使句子完整。

× It did pass the future because I am an hour second students in the university.

✓ I am a second-year student at the university now.

句子结构混乱，时态和表达不正确。应明确表达“我现在是大学二年级学生”。

× I am an hour second students in the university.

✓ I am a second-year student at the university.

“hour”误用，应为“year”，且“students”应为单数“student”，与冠词“an”搭配。

× I'm not sure I can do what, but I think we can.

✓ I'm not sure what I can do, but I think I can manage.

句子结构不清晰，疑问词位置错误。应调整语序使表达明确。