Study— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时应更直接地回答问题，例如先明确说自己是学生，然后简要说明考试情况，避免口语化表达和冗余。

例: I am a high school student currently in grade 11. I have my yearly exams coming up next month, and the subjects are becoming more challenging as I progress.

提案: 回答应更连贯，避免语法错误和重复，使用连接词使句子流畅，并且注意词汇准确性。

例: I often study at the library because it is a quiet environment. This helps me concentrate better and be more productive than when I study at home.

提案: 回答应避免口语化表达和不完整的句子，使用更准确的词汇和连接词，使表达更自然和连贯。

例: Yes, it is definitely a good place to study. When I am in the library, I can focus better because the quiet atmosphere and seeing others study motivate me to work harder.

提案: 回答较好，但应注意避免重复词汇和语法错误，表达更简洁明了。

例: I have no major complaints about the facilities, but I wish the library would extend its opening hours on weekends since it currently only opens from 1 to 5 pm.

提案: 回答应避免口语填充词，使用更准确的表达方式，并且句子结构更完整。

例: I am interested in the education field because I have a passion for working with children. After finishing my HSC, I plan to enroll in a childcare course.

× I'm a high school student in 11 so I have my yearly exam in a month and you know as a senior student every subject is getting harder and harder.

✓ I'm a high school student in 11th grade, so I have my yearly exams in a month, and you know, as a senior student, every subject is getting harder and harder.

“in 11”应为“in 11th grade”，表示“十一年级”；“yearly exam”应为复数“yearly exams”，因为通常有多门考试。

× I go to library quite often to finish my homework and do my assessment or just catch up because the libraries.

✓ I go to the library quite often to finish my homework and do my assessments or just catch up because of the libraries.

“go to library”缺少定冠词，应为“go to the library”；“do my assessment”应为复数“assessments”；“because the libraries”缺少介词，应为“because of the libraries”。

× The library is such a quiet place and environment, I feel much more productive player compared to studying at home.

✓ The library is such a quiet place and environment, I feel much more productive compared to studying at home.

“productive player”中的“player”多余，应去掉，正确表达为“productive”。

× I can log in right whenever I start.

✓ I can log in right when I start.

“right whenever”搭配不当，应改为“right when”，表示“我一开始就能登录”。

× I don't really have any complaints to the facility though, but I do want them to extend the opening hours on weekends because right now apparently the the library only opens between 1:00 to 5:00 on on weekends.

✓ I don't really have any complaints about the facility though, but I do want them to extend the opening hours on weekends because right now apparently the library only opens from 1:00 to 5:00 on weekends.

“complaints to”应为“complaints about”；“opens between 1:00 to 5:00”应为“opens from 1:00 to 5:00”；“on on weekends”重复，应去掉一个“on”。

× I'm quite keen to the educational industry because I just have lots of passion to children, so I'm planning to enroll a childcare course after completing my HSC.

✓ I'm quite keen on the educational industry because I just have lots of passion for children, so I'm planning to enroll in a childcare course after completing my HSC.

“keen to”应为“keen on”；“passion to children”应为“passion for children”；“enroll a childcare course”应为“enroll in a childcare course”。