Study— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不清晰，语法和表达混乱，建议用简单明了的句子直接回答问题，例如说明自己是学生并说明专业。

例: I am a student, and I am majoring in finance.

提案: 回答内容不连贯，语法错误较多，建议直接说明学校位置和环境，使用连贯的句子表达观点。

例: I study at a university near the river, which provides a peaceful and quiet environment for studying. The campus has special facilities that I really like.

提案: 回答内容混乱且无关，建议直接评价学习环境并给出具体理由，使用连贯的句子。

例: Yes, it is a good place to study because it has beautiful campuses, well-equipped libraries, and active research programs.

提案: 回答表达不清，建议明确提出想要的改变并说明原因，使用简单明了的句子。

例: Yes, I would like the school canteen to offer more delicious and diverse food options, which would make it more convenient and enjoyable for students.

提案: 回答完全不相关且无意义，建议直接说明未来的学习计划，使用清晰的句子表达。

例: In the future, I plan to improve my professional skills and gain more knowledge in finance.

× I'm still lost in the room. You're still zones and I major in finance.

✓ I'm still a student. I'm in my final year and I major in finance.

原句结构混乱，表达不清晰。应明确表达自己是学生，说明学习阶段和专业。建议使用简单明了的句子结构。

× Translate is located near the river, which makes the environment very peaceful and just simple for studying.

✓ My university is located near the river, which makes the environment very peaceful and simple for studying.

原句中“Translate”用词不当，应为学校名称或“university”。“just simple”搭配不当，去掉“just”更合适。

× I really enjoying the news there.

✓ I really enjoy the news there.

“enjoying”用法错误，主语是“I”，应使用动词原形“enjoy”或现在进行时“I am enjoying”。此处表达习惯用一般现在时。

× I think it's very special facilities.

✓ I think it has very special facilities.

原句缺少谓语动词，且“it's”指代不明，应改为“it has”表示拥有特殊设施。

× I think it's possible to teachers and various politics and policy car.

✓ I think there are many teachers and various politics and policy courses.

原句结构混乱，词语搭配错误。应明确表达有许多老师和各种政治及政策课程。

× It participates in research programs so campers are beautiful and conveniently located with many sites of libraries and other things.

✓ It participates in research programs, and the campus is beautiful and conveniently located with many libraries and other facilities.

“campers”应为“campus”，“sites of libraries”表达不当，应为“many libraries”。句子连接不当，需用连词连接。

× Yes, I applied so tank has my skirt to make such a Sander.

✓ Yes, I hope the school can make some changes.

原句无意义且结构混乱，无法理解。根据上下文推测，表达希望学校做出改变。

× It's good or for more than delicious food options, which would make it more convenient and enjoyable for students, improving the variety of meals well also.

✓ It would be good to have more delicious food options, which would make it more convenient and enjoyable for students, improving the variety of meals as well.

“It's good or for more than”表达错误，应改为“It would be good to have”。“improving the variety of meals well also”语序不当，改为“improving the variety of meals as well”。

× And other things done at the time. She's having more people's sources skills.

✓ I plan to improve my research skills and learn more from others in the future.

原句结构混乱，表达不清。根据上下文推测，表达未来学习计划，提升技能和学习他人经验。