Study— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Используйте правильную форму глагола и существительного, чтобы ответ был грамматически корректным и естественным. Например, используйте единственное число для "student" и правильное время глагола.

例: Currently, I am a student in high school.

提案: Сократите ответ, избегайте повторов и используйте связующие слова для логичности. Также исправьте грамматические ошибки и сделайте ответ более естественным.

例: I study at Murugad High School in Calicut. It is considered one of the best schools in the city, and many people wish to study here. I am very glad to be a student at this school.

提案: Используйте связующие слова для плавности, исправьте грамматические ошибки и сделайте ответ более структурированным и конкретным.

例: Yes, I think it is a good place to study because the school has excellent teachers who always help with subjects. Moreover, the use of modern technologies makes learning easier. Additionally, the school is comfortable and conveniently located in the city center.

提案: Ответ неполный и содержит грамматические ошибки. Постарайтесь завершить мысль, использовать связующие слова и более точные выражения.

例: Yes, I would like to make some changes to the place where I study. Firstly, I would modernize the school's design because it looks old and outdated. Additionally, I would improve the facilities to make the environment more comfortable for students.

提案: Сделайте ответ более связным и уточните детали, используя связующие слова и избегая разговорных выражений.

例: My future study plan is to get accepted into my dream university's foundation program. I like this option because it gives me more time to focus on my interests and allows me to study a variety of subjects.

× Currently, I am students in a high school.

✓ Currently, I am a student in a high school.

The word 'students' is plural, but the subject 'I' is singular. The correct form is 'a student' to match the singular subject.

× I study at high school called Murugad.

✓ I study at a high school called Murugad.

The phrase 'high school' needs an article before it. Since it is mentioned for the first time and is singular, the indefinite article 'a' is appropriate.

× It is located in Calicut and is this school is considered as a best school in the city and many people wish to study here and I am very glad that I am a student here.

✓ It is located in Calicut and this school is considered the best school in the city. Many people wish to study here, and I am very glad that I am a student here.

The phrase 'is this school' is incorrect; it should be 'this school is'. Also, 'a best school' is incorrect because 'best' is a superlative adjective and should be preceded by the definite article 'the'. The sentence was also run-on and needed to be split for clarity.

× I think yes, it is good place to study because in the school have excellent teachers who will always help you with subjects and the modern technologies.

✓ I think yes, it is a good place to study because the school has excellent teachers who will always help you with subjects and modern technologies.

The phrase 'good place' requires the indefinite article 'a'. Also, 'in the school have' is incorrect; it should be 'the school has' to correctly express possession.

× It is really helpful for students here and it's really comfortable and the location is really good.

✓ It is really helpful for students here, it's really comfortable, and the location is very good.

No major article error here, but adding commas improves readability. 'Really good' can be better expressed as 'very good' for formality.

× It's located in the center of the city.

✓ It's located in the center of the city.

This sentence is correct as is; 'the center' correctly uses the definite article.

× Yes, I would like to make any changes to place where I study.

✓ Yes, I would like to make some changes to the place where I study.

The phrase 'make any changes' is incorrect in affirmative sentences; 'some changes' is appropriate. Also, 'to place' needs the definite article 'the'.

× At first I would change the design of school because it looks so old and it really doesn't consider it as a modern.

✓ At first, I would change the design of the school because it looks so old and it really isn't considered modern.

'Design of school' requires the definite article 'the'. The phrase 'doesn't consider it as a modern' is incorrect; the correct passive form is 'isn't considered modern'.

× I would change the design more modern and additionally I would.

✓ I would change the design to be more modern, and additionally, I would...

The sentence is incomplete and lacks clarity. 'Change the design more modern' is incorrect; it should be 'change the design to be more modern'. The sentence ends abruptly and needs completion.

× My future study plans are to get accepted into my dream university in the program foundation.

✓ My future study plans are to get accepted into my dream university's foundation program.

'In the program foundation' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'foundation program'. Also, 'my dream university' should be possessive to indicate the program belongs to the university.

× I like this because I have more time to myself and I can literally study anything.

✓ I like this because I have more time for myself and I can literally study anything.

The phrase 'time to myself' is less common and 'time for myself' is more appropriate in this context.