Study— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答较简短，缺少完整句子结构，且表达不够自然。建议使用完整句子并补充更多信息，使回答更自然流畅。

例: I am currently a postgraduate student at Sichuan University, where I am specializing in economics.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，且内容不够具体。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并提供更具体的描述。

例: I study at Sichuan University, which has many well-equipped teaching buildings. The professors are very professional and supportive.

提案: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够连贯。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，并避免重复。

例: Yes, I believe it is a great place to study because the campus has many spacious and well-lit teaching buildings that provide a comfortable learning environment.

提案: 回答表达了观点，但语法错误影响理解。建议注意时态和单复数的正确使用，并用更自然的表达方式。

例: No, I prefer to continue studying in the same environment because I believe that changing it might negatively affect my study efficiency.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和不完整的句子，表达不够清晰。建议使用完整句子，注意动词形式，并具体说明计划。

例: In the future, I plan to become a college teacher. Therefore, I need to learn more advanced economic theories and conduct research to improve my overall abilities.

× I'm a post graduate in Sichuan University.

✓ I'm a postgraduate at Sichuan University.

“post graduate”应写为一个词“postgraduate”，表示研究生；介词应使用“at”表示在某个学校。

× I study in Sichuan University.

✓ I study at Sichuan University.

表示在某个学校学习，介词应使用“at”而不是“in”。

× This college has beautiful seniors and most of the teaching building is places is useful for their students and our teachers are so professional.

✓ This college has beautiful seniors, and most of the teaching buildings and places are useful for their students. Our teachers are very professional.

“teaching building”应为复数“teaching buildings”；句子结构混乱，需拆分为两句；“is places is”错误，应改为“and places are”。

× Yeah, I think it's a good, so good place to study because our college school has so many teaching buildings, which offers a spacious and bright place, places for students.

✓ Yeah, I think it's a very good place to study because our college has many teaching buildings, which offer spacious and bright places for students.

“college school”重复，应只用“college”；“offers”应与复数主语“buildings”一致用“offer”；“place, places”重复，应去掉多余词。

× No, I prefer to study at the same places because I think when the study environment changed changes then the efficiency will be sharply dropped.

✓ No, I prefer to study at the same place because I think when the study environment changes, the efficiency will sharply drop.

“places”应为单数“place”，指同一个地方；“changed changes”重复，应用“changes”；“will be sharply dropped”被动语态不当，应改为主动语态“will sharply drop”。

× In the future I think I will be a college teacher, so I need to learning more advanced economic knowledge to boost my comprehensive ability and I need to do more research to. Pro.

✓ In the future, I think I will be a college teacher, so I need to learn more advanced economic knowledge to boost my comprehensive ability, and I need to do more research too.

“need to learning”中“learning”应为动词原形“learn”；句末“to. Pro.”不完整，应改为“too”表示“也”。