Study— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和重复，表达不够流畅。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并正确使用时态和单复数形式。

例: I am currently a graduate student preparing for my master's degree in financial management.

提案: 回答中地名表达不清晰，且语法错误较多。建议准确表达学校名称，注意单复数和冠词的使用。

例: I study at Changsha Qingdao Fang, which is a specialized institution for professional English teaching.

提案: 回答中有重复词汇和语法错误，表达不够简洁。建议使用连贯的句子，避免重复，并具体说明环境和师资优势。

例: I think it is a good place to study because it provides a professional environment and experienced teachers who help students learn effectively.

提案: 回答中重复较多，表达不清晰。建议简洁表达想法，说明椅子的问题及其对学习的影响。

例: I hope the school can replace some old chairs because they make noise when I sit, which distracts me during my studies.

提案: 回答语法错误严重，表达不完整且重复。建议明确表达未来计划，使用正确的时态和词汇。

例: My future study plan is to improve my English skills and achieve a high score on the IELTS test so that I can choose my preferred university.

× Now I am a graduate students.

✓ Now I am a graduate student.

这里的主语是单数第一人称“I”，所以后面的名词“student”应该用单数形式，而不是复数“students”。

× I currently my I currently preparing my master degree in the in last year and my main main subject is financial management.

✓ I am currently preparing my master's degree, and my main subject is financial management.

原句结构混乱，缺少谓语动词“am”，且“master degree”应加所有格“master's degree”，时间状语“in the last year”位置不当且表达不清，改为更自然的表达。

× Now I study in Changsha Qingdao Fang.

✓ Now I study at Changsha Qingdao Fang.

“study in”通常用于城市或国家，具体学校或机构用“study at”更合适。

× This is a special professional English teaching institutions.

✓ This is a special professional English teaching institution.

“institutions”是复数，但前面用的是不定冠词“a”，应改为单数“institution”。

× I think it is a good place to studies because they have a have a professional environment to supply supply to students to to learn more more knowledge and have a better teachers to teach with.

✓ I think it is a good place to study because they have a professional environment to provide students with more knowledge and better teachers to teach.

“to studies”应为动词原形“to study”；“supply supply to students to to learn more more knowledge”重复且用词不当，应改为“provide students with more knowledge”；“a better teachers”中“teachers”复数前不应有不定冠词“a”。

× I hope, I hope the place can change some classics chairs.

✓ I hope the place can change some classic chairs.

“classics chairs”中“classics”应为形容词“classic”修饰名词“chairs”。

× When I when I sit down in the chairs, the chairs always have a sound.

✓ When I sit down on the chairs, the chairs always make a sound.

“sit down in the chairs”应为“sit down on the chairs”；“have a sound”表达不自然，应改为“make a sound”。

× It is disturbed my my mind and and this term my study.

✓ It disturbs my mind and affects my study this term.

“It is disturbed my mind”语法错误，应为“It disturbs my mind”；“this term my study”表达不完整，改为“affects my study this term”。

× My future study plans is I hope I can I can preparing my preparing my English have a great great text and I can I can pick my my favorite.

✓ My future study plan is that I hope I can prepare for a great English test and choose my favorite.

“plans is”主谓不一致，应为“plan is”；“preparing”应为动词原形“prepare”；“have a great great text”应为“prepare for a great English test”；“pick my favorite”表达不清，改为“choose my favorite”。