Study— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答过于简短，缺乏细节和扩展。建议在回答时加入更多信息，如学习的专业或年级，以使回答更自然和丰富。

例: I'm a student currently studying computer science at university.

提案: 回答简单且缺乏细节。建议补充说明在家学习的具体环境或原因，使回答更具体和连贯。

例: I usually study at my home because it's quiet and comfortable, which helps me concentrate better.

提案: 回答过于简短，没有解释理由。建议在回答时加入原因和细节，使用连接词使回答更完整。

例: Yes, it is a good place to study because it is quiet and free from distractions, so I can focus well.

提案: 回答不完整，没有说明想要改变的具体内容。建议详细说明希望改变的方面及原因，使回答更具体和有说服力。

例: Yes, I would like to have a bigger desk and better lighting to make studying more comfortable.

提案: 回答不连贯且含糊，语法错误明显。建议直接回答问题，清晰表达未来的学习计划，并避免无关内容。

例: I plan to attend university to study engineering and hope to gain practical skills for my future career.

× And I plan to study at university and talk a lot.

✓ I plan to study at university and talk a lot.

句子开头不应使用连词“and”，因为它使句子结构不完整。应直接开始句子，保持句子完整性。

× And I plan to study at university and talk a lot.

✓ I plan to study at university and to talk a lot.

在并列动词短语中，保持结构一致性更清晰。这里“study”和“talk”应使用相同形式，建议在“talk”前加“to”。