Study— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时应注意语法准确性，例如“major in Journalism and communication”应为“majoring in Journalism and Communication”，并且句子结构应更自然流畅。此外，避免冗余信息，如“have my college life”表达不够地道。

例: I am currently a student majoring in Journalism and Communication at Shandong University, which is located in the northeast of China.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和重复表达，如“like I mentioned before”不必要，且“it's a really beautiful cities”中“cities”应为单数。建议使用连贯的句子并避免重复。

例: I study at Shandong University, which is located in Jinan, the capital city of Shandong province. It's a really beautiful city in the northeast of China.

提案: 回答内容不够积极，且表达不够清晰。应直接回答问题并提供具体理由，避免重复和语法错误，如“over 40 Celsius degree”应为“over 40 degrees Celsius”。

例: Yes, I think it is a good place to study because the university has excellent facilities. However, the summer can be very hot, often over 40 degrees Celsius, so I usually study indoors in the dormitory or laboratory.

提案: 回答不够清晰，语法错误较多，表达不完整。建议明确表达想法，使用完整句子，并且避免重复词汇。

例: Yes, I would like a quieter place to study because the classroom and dormitory are often noisy, which makes it hard to concentrate or speak aloud when I study.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误，如“planning go to the British”应为“planning to go to Britain”。建议使用更准确的表达，并丰富细节使回答更完整。

例: I am planning to go to Britain to continue my studies. I want to earn a master's degree there and then return to China to find a job.

× I am currently a student major in Journalism and communication.

✓ I am currently a student majoring in Journalism and Communication.

动词major后面应使用现在分词形式majoring，表示正在进行的动作。

× I have my college life in Shandong University which located in North East of China.

✓ I am having my college life at Shandong University, which is located in the northeast of China.

句子缺少be动词is，且介词应为at表示在某个学校。

× It's in the northeast of China and it's a really beautiful cities.

✓ It's in the northeast of China and it's a really beautiful city.

主语是单数it's，后面应使用单数名词city，而不是复数cities。

× At some point, I think it is because the weather here in summer is really really hot.

✓ At some point, I think it is because the weather here in summer can be really, really hot.

表达天气可能很热时，使用情态动词can更合适，表示可能性。

× I have to stay at dormitory or laboratory to study the whole day and in winter just like the same.

✓ I have to stay at the dormitory or laboratory to study the whole day, and in winter it's just the same.

缺少冠词the，且句子后半部分缺少主语和谓语，需补充完整。

× Yeah, I always study in the classroom or dormitory, but there's always someone relaxing there or studying there, so I can't just make noise or or recite something loudly.

✓ Yeah, I always study in the classroom or dormitory, but there's always someone relaxing or studying there, so I can't make noise or recite something loudly.

去掉重复的or，保持句子简洁。

× So I want studying somewhere.

✓ So I want to study somewhere.

动词want后应接不定式to study，而不是动名词studying。

× I'm planning go to the British to continue my study.

✓ I'm planning to go to Britain to continue my study.

动词plan后应接不定式to go，且British是形容词，表示国家应使用Britain。