Study— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时出现了重复，影响流畅性。建议避免重复表达，保持回答简洁自然。

例: I'm currently a student.

提案: 语法错误较多，如“I’m study”应为“I study”。建议加强基本语法练习，回答时注意时态和介词的正确使用。

例: I study website engineering at Qingdao University in Shandong province.

提案: 回答中有重复词汇“brilliant, brilliant”，且句子不完整。建议使用多样词汇，避免重复，并用完整句子表达观点。

例: Yes, it is a brilliant place to study because it has many study rooms and computer labs.

提案: 表达不够准确，“I hope they are built more study rooms”语法错误。建议学习正确表达愿望和建议的句型。

例: Yes, the campus is a bit small, so I hope they can build more study rooms.

提案: 句子结构混乱，语法错误多，表达不清晰。建议练习简单清晰的句子结构，明确表达未来计划。

例: After graduation, I want to learn more about website engineering and find a job in this field.

× I'm study from Qingdao University as in Shandong province.

✓ I study at Qingdao University in Shandong province.

这里使用了错误的动词形式“I'm study”，正确的应该是一般现在时“I study”，因为描述的是现在的事实。并且介词应为“at”表示在某个学校。

× I'm study from Qingdao University as in Shandong province.

✓ I study at Qingdao University in Shandong province.

介词“from”用错了，表示“来自”，这里应使用“at”表示“在某地学习”；“as in”也不合适，应直接用“in”表示“在山东省”。

× Yes, the is a brilliant, brilliant place to study. Many study rooms and computer labs.

✓ Yes, it is a brilliant place to study. There are many study rooms and computer labs.

句子缺少主语和谓语，导致结构不完整。应补充完整句子，使用“There are”引出后面的名词短语。

× Many study rooms and computer labs.

✓ There are many study rooms and computer labs.

单独一句话缺少谓语动词，且应使用复数形式“rooms”和“labs”，并用完整句式表达。

× Yes, the campus is a bit small so I hope they are built more study rooms.

✓ Yes, the campus is a bit small so I hope they build more study rooms.

“they are built”被动语态用错，且“they”指代不明，应使用主动语态“they build”，表示希望他们建造更多学习室。

× I want to about more website engine in the after graduation I hope find 2 job in in the field.

✓ I want to learn more about website engineering after graduation. I hope to find a job in the field.

句子结构混乱，缺少动词和介词，且数字“2”应改为冠词“a”，表达更自然。应拆分为两句，分别表达学习和找工作的意图。