Study— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答缺少冠词，语法错误较多，建议注意冠词的使用，并且回答应更完整自然。

例: I am a student currently studying at university.

提案: 语法错误频繁，表达不流畅，内容不清晰。建议使用正确的时态和句型，表达清楚所学专业及兴趣。

例: I study at Qingdao University, majoring in web energy. I find this subject very interesting.

提案: 表达混乱，语法错误多，内容不连贯。建议简洁明了地说明喜欢学习的原因，并用连词连接句子。

例: Yes, I think it is a good place to study because I have liked computer games since childhood, which inspired me to choose this subject.

提案: 回答内容不相关且表达混乱，缺乏逻辑。建议围绕学习环境或设施提出具体改进建议，并使用连词使句子连贯。

例: Qingdao is very beautiful, and I like it. However, I wish the university could provide more modern facilities, such as better computer labs.

提案: 表达不完整且重复，语法错误多。建议清晰表达未来计划，避免重复，并使用正确的句型。

例: Yes, I plan to pursue postgraduate studies in Macau, so I am currently learning English to prepare for that.

× I'm student.

✓ I'm a student.

这里缺少冠词'a'，因为'student'是单数可数名词，前面需要加不定冠词。

× I'm study at Qingdao University.

✓ I study at Qingdao University.

'I'm study'结构错误，'am'后应接现在分词表示进行时，但此处应使用一般现在时，直接用'I study'。

× I'm study website energy.

✓ I study website energy.

同上，'I'm study'错误，应使用一般现在时'I study'。

× It's very I, I, I think the subject is very interesting.

✓ I think the subject is very interesting.

句子中'It's very I'无意义，应删除。

× I feel very interested in to study because the in in the childhood, I very like.

✓ I feel very interested in studying because in my childhood, I liked it very much.

'interested in to study'应改为'interested in studying'，'in the childhood'应为'in my childhood'，'I very like'应为'I liked it very much'。

× I very like.

✓ I liked it very much.

表达过去喜欢的动作，动词应使用过去式'liked'。

× I really like international computer computer games, so I choose a subject.

✓ I really like international computer games, so I chose this subject.

重复单词'computer'应删除，'choose'应使用过去式'chose'，因为是过去做出的选择。

× Would you like the place where you study to make any changes?

✓ Would you like the place where you study to make any changes?

此句无语法错误，保持原句。

× Moreover, study is a very I have AI have I have a big change.

✓ Moreover, studying has changed a lot because of AI.

原句结构混乱，缺少主语和谓语，需重组句子表达意思。

× For example, GitHub is very early.

✓ For example, GitHub started very early.

'GitHub is very early'表达不清，应补充谓语动词，改为'GitHub started very early'。

× Yes, I have a future study plans

✓ Yes, I have future study plans.

'a'用于单数名词，'plans'为复数，故去掉'a'。

× I hope to become become post graduate from to Macau.

✓ I hope to become a postgraduate in Macau.

'post graduate'应合并为'postgraduate'，'from to Macau'错误，应为'in Macau'。

× So I. Learn English.

✓ So I am learning English.

句子不完整，应补充谓语动词，使用现在进行时表达正在学习英语。