Study— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答简洁明了，但可以稍微丰富内容，增加一些细节描述，比如为什么选择中国画专业。

例: I'm currently a student majoring in Chinese painting at Shanghai University because I have a deep passion for traditional art and want to preserve this cultural heritage.

提案: 回答较自然，但口语中“you know”略显口语化且重复，建议使用更正式的表达，并且可以用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: I usually study at the university library because seeing others work hard motivates me to do the same, whereas studying alone makes it harder to stay focused.

提案: 回答结构清晰，内容具体，建议在连接词使用上稍作改进，使表达更流畅。

例: Yes, I think it's a good place to study because the environment is extremely quiet, which helps me concentrate. Moreover, seeing others working hard motivates me to stay focused.

提案: 回答内容具体，但句子结构稍显复杂，建议简化表达并使用连接词使逻辑更清晰。

例: Yes, I would like the library to be bigger because it is often crowded. As a result, it's hard to find a seat unless you arrive early or make a reservation.

提案: 回答不够连贯，语法和表达有误，建议使用完整句子并清晰表达观点。

例: I'm not sure about my future study plans because I prefer to take things as they come rather than planning everything in advance.

× I'm not such a person that like plan everything in advance.

✓ I'm not such a person that likes to plan everything in advance.

这里的主语是单数的"person"，谓语动词"like"需要加第三人称单数的-s，且"plan"前应加不定式to，构成"likes to plan"。错误在于动词形式不正确，导致主谓不一致。建议记住第三人称单数动词加-s的规则，并注意动词搭配。