Study— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答简洁明了，但可以稍微丰富内容，使回答更自然流畅。建议在回答中加入学习的领域或年级等信息。

例: I am currently a student, studying economics at university.

提案: 回答基本符合要求，但语法上有小错误，'in' 应改为 'at'，'Economy' 应为 'Economics'。建议注意介词和专业名称的正确使用。

例: I study at Beijing International Studies University, majoring in Economics.

提案: 回答内容有些重复且表达不够清晰，'the your major' 是错误表达。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用连词使句子更连贯。

例: Yes, it is a good place to study because the university offers diverse international programs and requires students to study their major alongside a foreign language.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，如 'study the nature' 和 'a wide of opportunities'。建议使用更准确的词汇和表达，并避免重复前文内容。

例: Yes, I would like the university to offer more flexible course options so that I can focus more on my major while still improving my language skills.

提案: 回答表达了计划，但语法和用词有待改进，如 'post graduate' 应为 'postgraduate'，'economy' 应为 'Economics'。建议使用更准确的词汇和连贯的句子结构。

例: I plan to continue my studies by preparing for the postgraduate entrance exam next year to deepen my knowledge of Economics.

× I study in the Beijing International Studies University and I major in Economy.

✓ I study at Beijing International Studies University and I major in Economics.

在英语中，大学名称前通常不加冠词“the”，除非名称本身包含冠词。此外，专业名称应使用复数形式或标准表达，如“Economics”而非“Economy”。

× I study in the Beijing International Studies University and I major in Economy.

✓ I study at Beijing International Studies University and I major in Economics.

表示学习地点时，通常用介词“at”而非“in”。

× it demands students to study the your major and other language subject at the same time.

✓ it requires students to study their major and other language subjects at the same time.

“demands”用法不当，通常用“requires”表示要求；“the your”是错误的重复冠词和代词；“subject”应为复数“subjects”，因为有多个语言科目。

× it demands students to study the your major and other language subject at the same time.

✓ it requires students to study their major and other language subjects at the same time.

“the your”是错误的冠词和代词搭配，应使用“their”表示所属关系。

× so I can have a wide of opportunities to express myself in other languages.

✓ so I can have a wide range of opportunities to express myself in other languages.

“a wide of opportunities”结构错误，应使用固定搭配“a wide range of opportunities”。

× our school requires us to study the nature and another language subjects simultaneously, so I can have a wide of opportunities to express myself in other languages.

✓ our school requires us to study natural science and another language subject simultaneously, so I can have a wide range of opportunities to express myself in other languages.

“study the nature”表达不准确，应改为“study natural science”或类似表达；“another language subjects”中“another”用于单数，后接复数“subjects”不匹配，应改为单数“subject”。

× our school requires us to study the nature and another language subjects simultaneously, so I can have a wide of opportunities to express myself in other languages.

✓ our school requires us to study natural science and another language subject simultaneously, so I can have a wide range of opportunities to express myself in other languages.

“another”后应接单数名词，且“subjects”应为单数“subject”，保持数的一致。

× I want to study further so I'm prepared to take a post graduate entrance exam in a year and to learn more about economy.

✓ I want to study further so I'm preparing to take a postgraduate entrance exam in a year and to learn more about economics.

“I'm prepared”表示已经准备好，语境应为正在准备，故用现在进行时“I'm preparing”；“post graduate”应连写为“postgraduate”；“economy”应为专业名称“economics”。