Study— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够完整，句子中断，表达不流畅。建议回答时保持句子完整，避免中断，并且直接回答问题。

例: I am a full-time student. I recently graduated from Chinese Affairs University in July and am currently pursuing further studies.

提案: 表达不够清晰，重复词语较多，句子结构不够自然。建议简洁明了地描述学习地点，并避免重复。

例: I study at a university located in the northwestern part of Beijing, which provides a quiet and conducive atmosphere for studying.

提案: 回答不连贯，语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议使用连贯的句子，清楚表达观点，并使用连接词。

例: Yes, it is a good place to study because it is away from the city center, which helps us stay focused from Monday to Friday. Moreover, the environment is peaceful and quiet.

提案: 表达基本清楚，但有语法和用词错误，句子不够流畅。建议使用更准确的词汇和句子结构。

例: To be honest, I don't want any major changes because the current atmosphere is wonderful. However, it would be better if the classrooms were equipped with modern facilities.

提案: 表达不够流畅，有语法错误，信息表达不完整。建议使用正确的时态和连词，清晰表达计划。

例: Although I recently graduated from university, I have decided to continue studying and pursue a postgraduate degree. Therefore, I am preparing for the English test to apply to a university in Hong Kong.

× I'm a full time student and I have graduated from Chinese Affairs University in July. My.

✓ I'm a full-time student and I graduated from Chinese Affairs University in July.

句子结构不完整，'My.' 是不完整的句子，应删除。'full time' 应为复合形容词 'full-time'。此外，'have graduated' 与具体时间点 'in July' 连用时，应使用一般过去时 'graduated'。

× I studied in our Peking, but our university is located in the northwestern part of of this city, so we have a quite quite good atmosphere for studying.

✓ I studied at our Peking, but our university is located in the northwestern part of this city, so we have a quite good atmosphere for studying.

'studied in our Peking' 中应使用介词 'at' 表示具体学校。'of of' 是重复，应删除一个。'quite quite' 也是重复，应删除一个。

× Yes, first our school is from the city and so we we always care staying in school from Monday to Friday which can keep us concentrated in studies and our environment is quite peaceful such.

✓ Yes, first our school is in the city and so we always stay in school from Monday to Friday which helps us concentrate on our studies and our environment is quite peaceful.

'school is from the city' 应为 'school is in the city'。'care staying' 用法错误，应改为 'stay'。'keep us concentrated in studies' 应为 'helps us concentrate on our studies'。句尾 'such' 无意义，应删除。

× To be honest, I don't want some big huge changes in my university.

✓ To be honest, I don't want any big changes in my university.

'don't want some' 用法不当，应使用 'any'。'big huge' 形容词重复，应选用一个。

× But if we could teach room, teaching room could be equipped with some modern facilities.

✓ But if the teaching rooms could be equipped with some modern facilities, it would be better.

句子结构混乱，'if we could teach room' 不通顺，应改为 'if the teaching rooms could be equipped'。

× Although I though I have graduated from university recently but I decided to keep studying and get a post graduate degree.

✓ Although I thought I had graduated from university recently, I decided to keep studying and get a postgraduate degree.

'though' 应为 'thought'。'have graduated' 与 'recently' 搭配时，若后文为过去时，前文应使用过去完成时 'had graduated'。'post graduate' 应合写为 'postgraduate'。

× So I take English or test to prepare for Hong Kong university.

✓ So I am taking the English test to prepare for Hong Kong University.

'take English or test' 语法错误，应为 'am taking the English test'。'Hong Kong university' 应大写为 'Hong Kong University'。