Study— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you work or are you a student?
受験者
I'm currently a student at Northeast Forestry University majoring in Logistics Engineering. I chose this field because I have a strong interest in it and want to engage in related works in the future.
試験官
Where do you study?
受験者
I usually study at home because it provides a quiet and comfortable environment which can help me concentrate better. Additionally, I can also control the temperature and the lighting of the environment to suit my study needs.
試験官
Is it a good place to study?
受験者
Yes, it's definitely a good place to study. It provides a quiet and comfortable environment, which can help me feel better. Additionally, I can also control the lightening and the temperature to suit my study needs.
試験官
Would you like the place where you study to make any changes?
受験者
Yes, I would appreciate if the place I started to make some changes. For example, updated libraries and study areas would be beneficial. Additionally, faster Wi-Fi and more computers are also great. More green space and recreational areas can also help.
試験官
What are your future study plans?
受験者
To be honest, I don't have immediate future study plan. I want to gain more work experience before future study.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you work or are you a student?
スコア: 85.0提案: 回答较为完整且自然，但可以更简洁，避免重复表达“strong interest”和“want to engage in related works”。建议用更具体的词汇描述专业兴趣。
例: I'm a student at Northeast Forestry University, majoring in Logistics Engineering because I'm fascinated by supply chain management and hope to build a career in this field.
Where do you study?
スコア: 90.0提案: 回答自然且内容具体，使用了连接词“additionally”，但可以稍微简化句子结构，使表达更流畅。
例: I usually study at home since it's quiet and comfortable, which helps me focus. Also, I can adjust the lighting and temperature to create the ideal study environment.
Is it a good place to study?
スコア: 80.0提案: 回答内容重复了前一个问题的内容，缺乏新信息。建议增加具体细节或个人感受，避免重复。
例: Yes, it's an excellent place to study because the quiet atmosphere helps me concentrate, and being able to adjust the lighting and temperature makes me feel comfortable and focused.
Would you like the place where you study to make any changes?
スコア: 75.0提案: 回答中有语法错误（"if the place I started to make some changes"），表达不够流畅。建议注意语法准确性，并用连接词使内容更连贯。
例: Yes, I would appreciate some changes, such as updated libraries and study areas. Moreover, faster Wi-Fi, more computers, and additional green spaces for relaxation would greatly improve the study environment.
What are your future study plans?
スコア: 85.0提案: 回答简洁且直接，但“future study plan”应为复数形式“future study plans”，且可以稍作扩展说明理由。
例: To be honest, I don't have immediate future study plans because I want to gain practical work experience first, which I believe will help me in my further studies later on.
文法
× Yes, I would appreciate if the place I started to make some changes.
✓ Yes, I would appreciate it if the place started to make some changes.
此处缺少形式宾语“it”，正确表达为“I would appreciate it if...”，表示假设条件句。
× To be honest, I don't have immediate future study plan.
✓ To be honest, I don't have an immediate future study plan.
名词短语前缺少冠词“an”，且“plan”应为单数形式，表示“一个计划”。
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