Study— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够清晰，语法错误较多，表达不自然。建议直接回答身份，并简洁说明专业或学习阶段。

例: I am a senior student majoring in design.

提案: 回答内容混乱，语法和词汇错误较多，表达不连贯。建议简洁明了地说明学习地点及其特点，避免语法错误。

例: I study in Changsha, a city in China. It is far from my hometown, and it is a noisy city. I can see snow there in winter.

提案: 回答较为简单，语法和词汇使用有误。建议使用连贯的句子，丰富细节，表达观点更自然。

例: Yes, it is a good place to study because Changsha is a beautiful city with pleasant weather, and I especially enjoy seeing the snow in winter.

提案: 表达不清晰，语法错误多，逻辑不连贯。建议明确指出想改进的方面，并用连词连接句子。

例: I would like to improve the transportation because my school is quite far from the subway station, which makes it inconvenient to go out and have fun.

提案: 回答不完整且语法错误严重，表达不自然。建议清晰说明未来计划和专业选择，避免断句错误。

例: I am preparing to apply for graduate school, and I plan to choose a different major, such as Earth sciences or mixed media.

× I am a senior student and measuring stage our design.

✓ I am a senior student and currently working on measuring our design stage.

句子结构不完整，缺少谓语动词，导致表达不清晰。应补充动词短语使句子完整。

× I'm started in Charleston.

✓ I started in Charleston.

“I'm started”错误使用了现在完成时，应使用一般过去时表达过去发生的动作。

× Uh, no city in the China and it is very far away from my hometown.

✓ Uh, a city in China and it is very far away from my hometown.

“in the China”中“the”不应与国家名连用，应直接使用“in China”。

× And especially because of the. Chantry is noise city so I can see the snow in winter.

✓ And especially because Chantry is a noisy city, so I can see snow in winter.

“noise city”应为“noisy city”，形容词形式错误；句子断裂，需连接词使句子通顺。

× It is a good place to study becauses Chantres beautiful city and always have a good weather's and especially I can see some snow in the winter.

✓ It is a good place to study because Chantres is a beautiful city and always has good weather, and especially I can see some snow in the winter.

“becauses”拼写错误，应为“because”；“weather's”错误使用所有格，应为“weather”；主谓不一致，“have”应为“has”。

× Uhm, I think maybe it's a transportable 'cause my school is located in a quite far away from the subway station.

✓ Uhm, I think maybe it's inconvenient because my school is located quite far away from the subway station.

“a transportable”用词错误，应为“inconvenient”；“in a quite far away”结构错误，应为“quite far away”。

× We if we want to go out to playing up, go somewhere.

✓ If we want to go out to play or go somewhere,

句子结构混乱，重复使用“we”，动词形式错误，应使用不定式“to play”。

× It is very not convenient.

✓ It is very inconvenient.

“very not convenient”表达错误，否定词“不”应与形容词结合形成“inconvenient”。

× I'm prepared to applying for graduate and I choose a different major.

✓ I'm preparing to apply for graduate school and I will choose a different major.

“prepared to applying”搭配错误，应为“preparing to apply”；时态和语态不匹配，未来计划用“will choose”。