Study— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时应注意语法完整性，例如在“preparing”前加上“am”以构成完整的现在进行时态。此外，回答可以更自然简洁，避免冗余。

例: Actually, I have just graduated from senior high school and I am preparing to study abroad in the UK.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，如“studying Chongqing”应为“studying in Chongqing”。此外，内容表达不够准确，‘practical scale’用词不当，应使用更合适的词汇。建议使用连贯的连接词使表达更流畅。

例: I'm currently studying in Chongqing, which is located in the southwestern part of China. However, I plan to study chemical engineering in the UK because this field has a strong history there, so I believe I can gain a lot of professional knowledge and practical experience.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误，如“a lot of beautiful scenery”应为“a lot of beautiful scenery spots”或“beautiful scenery”。建议使用更准确的词汇和句式，避免重复表达。

例: Yes, I think it's a good place to study because it has beautiful scenery and a quiet environment, which helps me concentrate and improve my academic performance.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整，如“For example, is quiet”缺少主语。句子结构不够连贯，建议使用连接词并完善句子，使表达更自然流畅。

例: I don't think my study place needs any changes because it is very convenient and comfortable. For example, it is quiet and well-lit, which helps me concentrate. Overall, I am quite satisfied with it.

提案: 回答中存在词汇错误，如“master degraded”应为“master's degree”。句子结构混乱，建议简化句子并使用正确的词汇，同时使用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: I plan to complete my bachelor's degree in the UK and then pursue a master's degree in Europe. Although it will be challenging, I am determined to do my best to achieve these goals.

× Actually, I just graduated from my Senior High School and preparing for study abroad in the UK.

✓ Actually, I just graduated from my Senior High School and am preparing to study abroad in the UK.

此处缺少助动词“am”，因为“preparing”是动词的现在分词形式，前面需要有be动词构成进行时态。建议在“and”后加上“am”，使句子结构完整。

× I'm currently studying Chongqing, which is located in the northwestern part of China.

✓ I'm currently studying in Chongqing, which is located in the northwestern part of China.

动词“study”后面表示地点时需要使用介词“in”，缺少介词导致表达不完整。

× However, I plan to go to the UK to study chemical engineering because this field originally developed here, so I believe I can acquire a lot of professional knowledge and practical scale here.

✓ However, I plan to go to the UK to study chemical engineering because this field originally developed there, so I believe I can acquire a lot of professional knowledge and practical skills there.

“here”指代地点不准确，因前文提到英国，应该用“there”。另外，“practical scale”应为“practical skills”，词语搭配错误。

× Yes, I think it's good place to study because there are a lot of beautiful scenery and it's very quiet, so I can concentrate on my study materials and get higher scores.

✓ Yes, I think it's a good place to study because there is a lot of beautiful scenery and it's very quiet, so I can concentrate on my study materials and get higher scores.

“good place”前缺少冠词“a”；“scenery”是不可数名词，谓语动词应使用单数“is”而非复数“are”。

× For example, is quiet and has good light which helps me concentrate.

✓ For example, it is quiet and has good lighting which helps me concentrate.

句子缺少主语“it”，导致句子结构不完整；“good light”应改为“good lighting”更符合表达习惯。

× My work's over, I'm quite satisfied with it.

✓ My work is over, and I'm quite satisfied with it.

“My work's over”口语化且不完整，建议写为“My work is over”；两个独立分句之间应使用连词“and”连接，避免句子断裂。

× I plan to finish my bachelor degree in the UK and continue to finish master degraded in Europe so.

✓ I plan to finish my bachelor's degree in the UK and continue to finish my master's degree in Europe.

“bachelor degree”和“master degraded”均应使用所有格形式“bachelor's degree”和“master's degree”；“degraded”拼写错误，应为“degree”；句尾“so”多余，应删除。