Study— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够自然且语法错误较多，建议简洁明了地表达职业身份，例如："I am currently a physical education teacher at a middle school."

例: I am currently a physical education teacher at a middle school, where I teach students various sports and fitness activities.

提案: 回答不清晰且语法错误严重，建议直接说明学校名称和专业，例如："I completed my master's degree at a university specializing in physical education and training."

例: I completed my master's degree at the University of Sports, majoring in physical education and training.

提案: 回答表达不清楚且用词不当，建议简洁表达对学校的评价并说明原因，例如："Yes, it is a great place to study because it focuses on sports science and has excellent facilities."

例: Yes, it is a great place to study because it specializes in sports science and offers excellent training facilities.

提案: 回答内容混乱且难以理解，建议明确表达是否希望学校改进，并给出具体理由，例如："I am satisfied with my school and do not think any changes are necessary because the facilities are excellent."

例: I am satisfied with my school and do not think any changes are necessary because the sports fields are large and well-maintained.

提案: 回答表达不流畅且语法错误，建议简洁明了地说明未来计划，例如："I plan to go abroad to Greece to pursue a PhD in sports science and conduct in-depth research."

例: I plan to go abroad to Greece to pursue a PhD in sports science, where I hope to conduct in-depth research in this field.

× I'm presently a physical education teacher that as middle school.

✓ I'm presently a physical education teacher at a middle school.

句中介词使用错误，应该用'at'表示在某个具体地点。建议记住常用职业和地点搭配的介词用法。

× I pumped in a complete my master degrees as a high university of this boards.

✓ I completed my master's degree at a university.

句中动词时态和表达不正确，'pumped in'不合适，应该用过去式'completed'表示完成学业。建议学习常用动词的正确时态和表达方式。

× I pumped in a complete my master degrees as a high university of this boards.

✓ I completed my master's degree at a university.

'master degrees'应为单数'master's degree'，因为通常指一个学位。建议注意可数名词的单复数形式。

× My major is physical education and training.

✓ My major is physical education and training.

此句无明显介词错误，保持原句。

× Yeah, definitely so high. University of Sports is my master's school and is a physical focus on the field over sports eyes.

✓ Yeah, definitely. The University of Sports is my master's school and focuses on physical education and sports science.

句中介词和表达混乱，'focus on'后应接具体内容，'field over sports eyes'表达不清。建议学习固定搭配和专业词汇表达。

× It will be honesty.

✓ To be honest,

'It will be honesty'表达不正确，应该用固定表达'To be honest'表示'说实话'。建议记忆常用固定表达。

× I don't think about it is.

✓ I don't think about it.

句中多余的'is'导致句子结构错误，应该去掉。建议注意句子主谓结构完整。

× I I guess my school is 12/3 AM in my that my in my country.

✓ I guess my school is one of the top in my country.

原句结构混乱，数字和时间表达不清，改为表达学校排名。建议简化句子，确保表达清晰。

× About the fields over super size.

✓ It has large sports fields.

原句介词和表达不当，改为简单明了的表达。建议学习常用名词短语搭配。

× I sync my iview significant with my school and.

✓ I am very satisfied with my school.

原句语法和拼写错误，表达不清，改为正确表达满意度的句子。建议注意拼写和句子完整性。

× My current plan is go to overseas to apply apply for PhD Greek, Greece.

✓ My current plan is to go overseas to apply for a PhD in Greece.

动词不定式缺失'to'，重复单词，国家名称表达错误。建议注意不定式用法和单词拼写。

× I think I want to deep research in the field over super science.

✓ I want to do deep research in the field of sports science.

介词使用错误，'field over super science'应为'field of sports science'。建议学习专业领域常用介词搭配。