Study— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答缺乏连贯性和明确性，句子结构混乱，无法清楚表达你的身份。建议直接回答问题，使用完整且连贯的句子，明确说明你是学生还是工作者。

例: I am currently a student studying at university. I focus on my courses and enjoy learning new things every day.

提案: 回答内容不相关且不连贯，无法表达学习地点。建议直接说明学习的学校或城市，并简要描述学习环境。

例: I study at the University of Beijing, which has a beautiful campus and excellent facilities.

提案: 回答不完整且与问题不符，缺乏具体描述。建议直接评价学习地点的优点，并提供具体理由。

例: Yes, it is a good place to study because the library is quiet and the classrooms are comfortable.

提案: 回答含糊且语法错误，未具体说明希望改变的内容。建议明确表达希望改进的方面，并简要说明原因。

例: Yes, I would like the university to improve the cafeteria food because healthier options would benefit students.

提案: 回答不清晰且语法混乱，未明确表达未来学习计划。建议清楚说明未来的学习目标和专业方向。

例: I plan to pursue a master's degree in sustainable development to contribute to environmental protection.

× And certainly.

✓ Yes, certainly.

原句缺乏主语和谓语，导致句子结构不完整。应补充完整的句子结构，使表达清晰。

× Students pursuing.

✓ I am a student pursuing my studies.

原句缺少谓语和宾语，句子不完整。应补充完整句子，明确表达身份和动作。

× They can, really.

✓ I really can.

原句结构混乱，缺乏明确主语和谓语。应调整语序，使句子通顺。

× Tom Hiddleston said the university is driving along.

✓ Tom Hiddleston said that the university is progressing well.

原句表达不清，‘driving along’用法不当。应使用更合适的表达方式。

× We do it for his own well.

✓ We do it for his own good.

原句用词错误，‘well’应改为‘good’以表达利益。

× I study really wants to him without causing the.

✓ I really want to study without causing any trouble to him.

原句语序混乱，缺少必要成分，导致意思不明。应调整语序并补充缺失部分。

× What is it about exclusivity?

✓ What is it about exclusivity?

该句语法正确，无需修改。

× Very quickly, though, because.

✓ I will answer very quickly, though, because...

原句不完整，缺少主语和谓语，导致表达不清。应补充完整句子。

× New Years is a little more peaceful.

✓ New Year is a little more peaceful.

‘New Years’应为单数形式‘New Year’，表示新年。

× Yes, I will write it started to make some changes.

✓ Yes, I will start to make some changes.

原句中‘will write it started’结构错误，应使用‘will start’表示将来动作。

× The injured have round tables or masters degree in 1000, said a moment.

✓ I plan to have round table discussions or pursue a master's degree soon.

原句结构混乱，词语搭配错误，表达不清。应重组句子，明确表达意图。

× Sustainable development.

✓ I want to study sustainable development.

单独的短语不能构成完整句子，应补充主语和谓语使句子完整。