Study— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够清晰，语法错误较多，表达不自然。建议简洁明了地回答问题，避免语法错误，并且保持句子通顺。

例: I am currently a student at university, majoring in communication studies. I am enjoying my time studying this subject.

提案: 回答中有语法和词汇错误，表达不够准确。建议使用正确的词汇和句子结构，避免拼写错误，并且提供具体细节。

例: I study at a university in the Georgian province of China. The campus is very convenient and has excellent facilities, such as modern classrooms and a well-stocked library. Being in the city also provides many opportunities for me.

提案: 回答中存在大量语法和词汇错误，表达不清晰。建议简洁明了地表达观点，使用正确的词汇和句子结构，并提供具体支持细节。

例: Yes, it is a good place to study because the environment is quiet and comfortable, which helps me concentrate. Also, there are plenty of resources like libraries and study rooms available.

提案: 表达不够流畅，有语法错误。建议简洁表达自己的观点，使用正确的语法和词汇，并具体说明改进的方面。

例: I am mostly satisfied with my university, but I think upgrading the technology, like providing faster Wi-Fi, would greatly improve the learning experience for students.

提案: 回答中有语法和词汇错误，表达不清晰。建议清楚地表达未来计划，使用正确的词汇和句子结构。

例: After graduating from my university, I would like to pursue a master's degree abroad because I enjoy communication studies and want to learn more.

× I am currently a student and I'm just finish it about my search air in my university and I majored in communication studies and how to say at really great time instead in it.

✓ I am currently a student and I've just finished my research here at my university. I major in communication studies and I'm having a really great time studying it.

句中“I'm just finish”时态错误，应使用现在完成时“I've just finished”表示刚完成的动作。动词“majored”应改为现在时“major”，因为学生目前仍在学习。建议注意时态一致性，描述当前状态用现在时，刚完成的动作用现在完成时。

× The campus has excellent facilities including modern classrooms and the whales not stocked library which greatly sport minoring.

✓ The campus has excellent facilities including modern classrooms and a well-stocked library which greatly supports learning.

原句中“whales not stocked”是拼写错误，应为“well-stocked”，形容词用法错误。动词“sport minoring”不合适，应为“supports learning”。建议注意形容词拼写和搭配的正确使用。

× The environment is quiet a comfort rible which helps me to concentrate better.

✓ The environment is quite comfortable which helps me to concentrate better.

“quiet a comfort rible”拼写和用词错误，应为“quite comfortable”。“quite”是副词修饰形容词“comfortable”。建议注意拼写和副词形容词搭配。

× Additionally there is the penalties of resources like libraries or starting rooms as opposed. Affection Save. Knurling.

✓ Additionally, there are plenty of resources like libraries or study rooms available.

原句“penalties of resources”用词错误，应为“plenty of resources”。“starting rooms”应为“study rooms”。句子结构混乱，需简化。建议注意词汇搭配和句子结构。

× Well, just one thing made me upload Upgrading the technology and resources available, such as faster Wi-Fi would be greatly enhanced the learning experience for students.

✓ Well, just one thing I would suggest is upgrading the technology and resources available, such as faster Wi-Fi, which would greatly enhance the learning experience for students.

原句“made me upload”用法错误，应使用情态动词“would suggest”。“would be greatly enhanced”时态和语态错误，应为“would greatly enhance”。建议注意情态动词和时态语态的正确使用。

× After Grange 18 from my university's I would like to pursue a master degree, starting a board of 'cause I really like the communication subjects I measured and there are still many things that I want to learn.

✓ After graduating from my university, I would like to pursue a master's degree abroad because I really like the communication subjects I major in and there are still many things that I want to learn.

“Grange 18”拼写错误，应为“graduating”。“starting a board”应为“studying abroad”。“measured”应为“major”。建议注意拼写和词汇搭配。