Study— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议加强语法基础，避免重复，并且用更准确的词汇表达专业内容。

例: I am a student at Shandong University, majoring in Journalism and Communication. I enjoy my major because it involves video editing and writing interesting articles for newspapers.

提案: 回答中表达不够流畅，部分词汇使用不当，建议使用更自然的表达方式，并注意句子结构的完整性。

例: I usually study at a coffee shop like Starbucks because I enjoy the ambient noise and background music. It helps me relax and concentrate better on my work.

提案: 回答内容较为完整，但存在语法错误和表达重复，建议简化句子并使用更准确的词汇。

例: Yes, it's a good place to study because you can order coffee or snacks when you feel tired. Also, Starbucks offers free Wi-Fi and water, which makes it very convenient.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰，建议练习使用条件句和更准确的词汇来表达愿望和建议。

例: Yes, I would like Starbucks to improve their Wi-Fi speed and provide more space for studying because it can get quite crowded sometimes.

提案: 回答表达基本清楚，但语法和用词有待改进，建议注意时态和冠词的使用，使表达更准确。

例: I plan to apply for a master's degree program in Hong Kong because I believe it will offer me more job opportunities in the future.

× Well, actually I am a students in Shandong University and measuring the journalism and communication.

✓ Well, actually I am a student in Shandong University and majoring in journalism and communication.

这里'students'是复数形式，但主语是单数'I'，应使用单数'student'。另外，'measuring'应为'majoring'，表示主修专业。

× and measuring the journalism and communication.

✓ and majoring in journalism and communication.

'measuring'是错误的动名词形式，正确表达是'majoring'，表示主修某专业。

× Actually, I I like my major because I sing you now the video edit and sometimes we need to write newspapers or interesting.

✓ Actually, I like my major because I am learning video editing now and sometimes we need to write interesting newspapers.

'sing you now the video edit'语法错误，应为'learning video editing'，表示正在学习视频编辑。

× In our Yuming Midilli study, I prefer starting in the coffee shop such as Starbucks, because I like the ambient noise and the background music.

✓ In our Yuming Midilli study, I prefer studying in coffee shops such as Starbucks, because I like the ambient noise and the background music.

'starting in the coffee shop'用词错误，应为'studying in coffee shops'，表示在咖啡店学习。

× I think that can help me on wind and relax.

✓ I think that can help me unwind and relax.

'help me on wind'是不正确的表达，应为'help me unwind'，表示放松。

× More than that, I can concentrate on my study works.

✓ More than that, I can concentrate on my study work.

'study works'复数形式不正确，'work'作为不可数名词表示学习任务。

× And now the Starbucks have have the free Wi-Fi and free water, so I think it is convenient.

✓ And now Starbucks has free Wi-Fi and free water, so I think it is convenient.

'Starbucks'作为单数名词，谓语动词应使用单数形式'has'。

× UM, to be honest, I want to Starbucks can makes your Wi-Fi faster or can make more space for studying or working because sometimes sharp is quite crowded.

✓ UM, to be honest, I want Starbucks to make their Wi-Fi faster or to make more space for studying or working because sometimes Starbucks is quite crowded.

'want to Starbucks can makes'结构错误，应为'want Starbucks to make'，表达希望某事发生。

× because sometimes sharp is quite crowded.

✓ because sometimes Starbucks is quite crowded.

'sharp'应为'Starbucks'，且作为单数名词，谓语用'is'。

× Personally, I want to apply the masters this program in Hong Kong and I think that will give me more opportunities when I looking for the jobs.

✓ Personally, I want to apply for the master's program in Hong Kong and I think that will give me more opportunities when I am looking for jobs.

'apply the masters this program'表达错误，应为'apply for the master's program'。'when I looking'缺少助动词'am'，应为'when I am looking'。