Study— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够连贯，表达不清晰，且信息不准确。建议简洁明了地回答问题，避免重复和语无伦次。

例: I am a student currently studying at One Knee University, which is located in the center of Nambour.

提案: 回答过于简短且语法错误，缺少具体信息。建议直接回答并补充专业名称，使用正确的语法。

例: I study at One Knee University, and my major is biotechnology.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清，且缺少连贯性。建议使用连词连接句子，具体描述设施和教师的帮助。

例: Yes, it is a great place to study because the university has well-equipped facilities, and the teachers are always willing to help students.

提案: 表达不流畅，句子断断续续，信息不够具体。建议使用连贯的句子表达希望增加公共区域的原因。

例: I hope my university can add more public areas because the number of students is increasing, and it is hard to find a quiet place to study for a long time.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不完整。建议清晰表达未来学习计划，使用完整句子和适当的词汇。

例: In the future, I plan to continue my studies by preparing for an important language exam. If I have more time, I would like to learn another language as well.

× I'm a student and now I. I mean. Universe Charge on One Knee University is located in the center of Nambour.

✓ I'm a student now. I mean, University of Sunshine Coast is located in the center of Nambour.

原句结构混乱，断句不当，导致表达不清晰。应将句子分开，补充缺失的词汇，使句子完整且通顺。

× I'm a student and my major is by technology.

✓ I'm a student and my major is biotechnology.

介词“by”使用错误，应该直接使用专业名称biotechnology。

× Yes, it is definitely a good place to study by university have. Very well equipted facilities and moreover our teachers are all waiting to help. Students to do. Something.

✓ Yes, it is definitely a good place to study. The university has very well-equipped facilities and moreover, our teachers are all willing to help students.

句子结构混乱，缺少主语和谓语，单词拼写错误。需要重组句子，补充主语谓语，纠正拼写。

× I hope you have my university add more public area.

✓ I hope my university adds more public areas.

介词“have”使用错误，且“area”应为复数形式“areas”，动词应与主语一致。

× Because now I don't find. Our students are more and more so I'd come to find a good place to study long time.

✓ Because now I can't find a good place to study for a long time as our students are increasing.

原句中“students are more and more”表达不准确，应使用“students are increasing”，且句子不完整，需补充完整表达。

× In the future, I plan to continue my study by preparing for a important language.

✓ In the future, I plan to continue my studies by preparing for an important language exam.

介词“by”使用不当，且冠词“a”应为“an”，句子需补充完整表达。

× If I have much more time, I want to learn the. Another language, yeah.

✓ If I have more time, I want to learn another language.

冠词使用错误，“the”不应出现在此处，且句子断裂，应连贯表达。