Study— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误，表达不自然。应使用正确的时态和表达方式，避免模糊不清。

例: I graduated last year, so I have been working for a year.

提案: 回答中时态混乱，且表达不够清晰。应明确时态并简洁表达。

例: I studied at Southwestern University of Finance and Economics in Chengdu, which is also my hometown.

提案: 回答不完整且含糊，语法和词汇使用错误较多。应简洁明了地说明理由并提供具体细节。

例: Yes, it is a good place to study because it is well-known for finance and economics and offers many learning opportunities.

提案: 回答语法错误严重，表达不清晰。应使用完整句子，明确说明希望改进的方面。

例: Yes, I would like the university to improve its facilities by incorporating more advanced technology, such as AI computers, to assist students.

提案: 回答语法和词汇错误严重，表达混乱。应清晰表达未来计划及原因，使用正确语法。

例: I plan to pursue a master's degree in Hong Kong, but due to financial concerns discussed with my family, I am saving money for a few years before starting.

× I graduated last year so I have been worked up for a year.

✓ I graduated last year so I have been working for a year.

这里的错误是动词时态使用错误，'have been worked up' 应该是现在完成进行时态，表示从过去持续到现在的动作，正确形式是 'have been working'。'worked up' 是过去分词短语，意思不同。

× I study in Source Western University of Finance and Economics in Chengdu, where I grew up and work now.

✓ I study at Southwestern University of Finance and Economics in Chengdu, where I grew up and work now.

介词使用错误，'study in' 应改为 'study at'，表示在某个学校学习。

× the university is known for finance and economics and provide manning at the vents, the knowledge and. Many opportunities.

✓ The university is known for finance and economics and provides many events, knowledge, and many opportunities.

主谓一致错误，主语是单数 'university'，谓语动词应为单数形式 'provides'。另外，'manning at the vents' 应为 'many events'，是拼写错误。

× Yes, and as the university has been changed with more advanced the technology and the fence ilities.

✓ Yes, and the university has changed with more advanced technology and facilities.

时态错误，'has been changed' 是被动语态，语境应为主动语态 'has changed'。另外，'the fence ilities' 是拼写错误，应为 'facilities'。

× As some AI computer and some AI machine to helps us with the. Meh.

✓ There are some AI computers and some AI machines to help us with the work.

代词和动词形式错误，'to helps' 应为 'to help'，且句子缺少主语，需补充 'There are'。

× I send to pursues a master degree in Hong Kong but when I talk to says with my family members of this ad they counts.

✓ I plan to pursue a master's degree in Hong Kong, but when I talked with my family members about this, they said.

时态错误，'send to pursues' 应为 'plan to pursue'，'talk to says' 应为过去时 'talked' 和 'said'。

× I send to pursues a master degree in Hong Kong but when I talk to says with my family members of this ad they counts.

✓ I plan to pursue a master's degree in Hong Kong, but when I talked with my family members about this, they said.

代词使用错误，'talk to says with' 结构不正确，应为 'talked with'。

× Uh affords the abuse for my situation, the living expenses.

✓ They can't afford the expenses for my situation, especially the living expenses.

量词使用错误，'affords the abuse' 应为 'can't afford the expenses'，表达经济负担。

× So I walked up for years to saving mountings.

✓ So I have been saving money for years.

时态错误，'walked up' 不符合语境，应为现在完成进行时 'have been saving'，'mountings' 拼写错误，应为 'money'。