Study— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够清晰，语法和表达存在较多错误，影响理解。建议简洁明了地回答问题，避免重复和语法错误。

例: I'm currently a student studying marketing. I find it very interesting because it helps me understand consumer behavior. I enjoy the subjects as they allow me to interact with different people.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整，建议使用完整句子并清晰表达原因和目的。

例: I study marketing at Hanson University, which is located in a convenient area. I chose this university because it offers excellent marketing courses, and I hope to gain practical skills to build a successful career.

提案: 回答内容较为简单，部分词汇使用不当（如'Queens based'），建议使用准确词汇并丰富细节。

例: I think it is a good place to study because the area is very quiet. There are many green spaces nearby, which help me feel relaxed and focused. This environment makes it easier for me to concentrate on my work.

提案: 表达不流畅且有语法错误，建议用完整句子表达愿望，并说明原因。

例: I would like the study area to be quieter because sometimes it gets too noisy, which makes it hard to concentrate.

提案: 回答中有语法和拼写错误，表达不完整。建议清晰表达未来计划和目的。

例: After finishing university, I plan to pursue a master's degree in marketing to deepen my knowledge and improve my career prospects.

× I'm currently I'm not getting student which I'm fine.

✓ I'm currently a student, and I'm fine.

句子结构混乱，缺少连词和冠词，导致表达不清晰。应使用连词连接句子，并添加冠词使句子完整。

× Very interesting because it's house me understand consumer behavior.

✓ It's very interesting because it helps me understand consumer behavior.

代词使用错误，'it's house me'应为'it helps me'，表示帮助理解。

× I enjoyed his subjects as it allows. Me to interact with different people.

✓ I enjoy this subject as it allows me to interact with different people.

代词使用错误，'his subjects'应为'this subject'，且时态应与上下文一致。

× I study marketing it Hanson University which is located in a convenience air.

✓ I study marketing at Hanson University, which is located in a convenient area.

句子缺少介词'at'，且'convenience air'应为'convenient area'，句子结构不完整。

× I study marketing it Hanson University which is located in a convenience air.

✓ I study marketing at Hanson University, which is located in a convenient area.

介词使用错误，'study marketing it Hanson University'应为'study marketing at Hanson University'。

× I chose this university because it offers excellent. Causes in marketing in I hope to gain practical skill to build a successful career and.

✓ I chose this university because it offers excellent courses in marketing, and I hope to gain practical skills to build a successful career.

句子断裂且结构混乱，缺少连词和完整表达，应连接句子并修正单词拼写。

× I hope to gain practical skill to build a successful career and.

✓ I hope to gain practical skills to build a successful career.

'skill'应为复数'skills'，表示多项技能。

× There are many Queens based around which helped me feel relaxed and focused.

✓ There are many green spaces around which help me feel relaxed and focused.

'Queens'拼写错误，应为'green spaces'，且动词时态应与主语一致。

× There are many Queens based around which helped me feel relaxed and focused.

✓ There are many green spaces around which help me feel relaxed and focused.

动词时态错误，'helped'应为'help'，因为描述的是现在的情况。

× I would like. Best update air to be quieter because sometimes it gets too noise which makes it hard to concentrate.

✓ I would like the campus area to be quieter because sometimes it gets too noisy, which makes it hard to concentrate.

介词和词汇使用错误，'Best update air'应为'the campus area'，'too noise'应为'too noisy'。

× sometimes it gets too noise which makes it hard to concentrate.

✓ sometimes it gets too noisy, which makes it hard to concentrate.

形容词和副词使用错误，'noise'是名词，需用形容词形式'noisy'。

× After finishing university, I plan to pursue as masters degree in marketing to deeper mice knowledge and improve Korean. Prospects.

✓ After finishing university, I plan to pursue a master's degree in marketing to deepen my knowledge and improve career prospects.

句子结构混乱，单词拼写错误，缺少冠词，应调整句子使其通顺。

× After finishing university, I plan to pursue as masters degree in marketing to deeper mice knowledge and improve Korean. Prospects.

✓ After finishing university, I plan to pursue a master's degree in marketing to deepen my knowledge and improve career prospects.

'masters degree'应为'a master's degree'，'deeper mice knowledge'应为'deepen my knowledge'，'Korean. Prospects'应为'career prospects'。