Study— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is generally clear but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, such as "I'm not currently a studying" and "Isles exam" instead of "IELTS exam." Also, avoid redundancy and keep sentences concise. Try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

例: I recently completed my degree in Computer Engineering, so I am not currently studying at a university. However, these days I am focusing on preparing for the IELTS exam, which requires me to spend a lot of time studying English.

提案: Your answer is clear and relevant but could be improved by adding a linking word and more specific details to support your statement. Also, "more interesting" is a bit vague; specify what makes it interesting or better for you.

例: I study at home because I find it more comfortable and can concentrate better there. For example, I can control the environment and avoid distractions.

提案: Your answer addresses the question but includes filler words like "Uh" and some grammatical mistakes such as "to a study English." Try to avoid fillers and use correct grammar. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

例: Definitely yes, it is the best place for me because it is quiet and peaceful. Moreover, my room is very cozy and comfortable for studying English.

提案: Your answer is clear and relevant. To improve, combine your ideas using linking words to make the response more coherent and avoid short, choppy sentences.

例: Honestly, no. I like this place and everything in it because it is comfortable and cozy for studying, and it is also quiet with no distractions.

提案: Your answer is brief and contains errors such as "Isles exam" instead of "IELTS exam" and "A7 score" which is unclear. Provide more specific details about your plans and use correct terminology. Also, expand your answer to include reasons or steps you will take.

例: I plan to complete my preparation for the IELTS exam soon because I want to achieve a band score of 7. This will help me pursue further studies or career opportunities abroad.

× Recently I completed my degree in Computer Engineering, so I'm not currently a studying.

✓ Recently I completed my degree in Computer Engineering, so I'm not currently studying.

The phrase 'a studying' is incorrect because 'studying' is a verb in its -ing form and should not be preceded by the article 'a'. The correct form is 'studying' without 'a'.

× However, these days I'm focusing on preparing for the Isles exam which requires me to a spend a lot of time studying English.

✓ However, these days I'm focusing on preparing for the Isles exam which requires me to spend a lot of time studying English.

The phrase 'to a spend' is incorrect because the infinitive form 'to spend' should not be preceded by the article 'a'. The correct form is 'to spend'.

× Definitely yes, it is the best place for me because it is quiet and peaceful. Uh, and my room is very cozy and comfortable to a study English.

✓ Definitely yes, it is the best place for me because it is quiet and peaceful. Uh, and my room is very cozy and comfortable to study English.

The phrase 'to a study English' is incorrect because the infinitive verb 'to study' should not be preceded by the article 'a'. The correct form is 'to study English'.