Study— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时应更自然流畅，避免语法错误和不完整句子。可以简洁明了地表达身份和未来计划。

例: I am currently a medical student in Guangzhou, and I hope to build a career in medicine in the future.

提案: 回答中存在语法和表达错误，句子不连贯。应直接说明学校名称，描述学校特点时使用连贯句子和适当连接词。

例: I study at Sun Yat-sen University, which is a famous and beautiful college in China. It has many excellent professors who are skilled in teaching and have strong academic backgrounds.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不准确，应注意时态和单复数，使用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: Yes, definitely. As a graduate student, I don't have many classes every day, so I spend most of my time doing experiments in the laboratories. Moreover, the school provides a lot of advanced equipment for my research.

提案: 回答中时态和表达不准确，句子断裂。应使用连贯句子，正确表达时间和建议。

例: Yes, I would like some changes. The distance between the school and the hospital where I work is quite long, so I spend about two hours commuting every day. I think the school should provide more accommodation near the hospital.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清，应使用连贯句子清晰表达学习计划。

例: First of all, I need to complete my research in basic medicine. After that, I hope to graduate from my school and then pursue further studies or work in the future.

× Honor Student I'm currently starting medicine in Guangzhou and I hope to build a career in medicine in the future.

✓ I am an honor student. I'm currently studying medicine in Guangzhou, and I hope to build a career in medicine in the future.

原句结构混乱，缺少主语和谓语的清晰表达。应分成两句，明确表达身份和正在进行的动作。建议使用完整句子，避免句子碎片。

× Started in soon your son university. Is a famous and beautiful College in China.

✓ I started at Sun Yat-sen University. It is a famous and beautiful college in China.

原句缺少主语和谓语，句子不完整。应补充主语和谓语，使句子完整通顺。

× There are many excellent professors who are skilled in teaching. And there have bag have strong backgrounds.

✓ There are many excellent professors who are skilled in teaching and have strong backgrounds.

原句中“have bag have”是错误表达，应改为“have”表示拥有。连接词使用不当，应合并句子使表达更流畅。

× And the school provide many at once equipment for me to do my research.

✓ And the school provides a lot of equipment for me to do my research.

主语“the school”是单数，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式“provides”。“many at once equipment”表达不正确，应改为“a lot of equipment”。

× Every day I took about two hours to commit to hospital.

✓ Every day it takes me about two hours to commute to the hospital.

描述习惯性动作应使用一般现在时，“took”是过去时不合适。动词“commit”用错，应为“commute”表示通勤。

× And I think schools should provide more accommodation near the hospital.

✓ And I think the school should provide more accommodation near the hospital.

“schools”应为特指的“the school”，且前文提到的是单数学校。使用定冠词更准确。

× And the pursue other ones studies of work. In the future.

✓ And then pursue other studies or work in the future.

句子结构混乱，缺少主语和谓语，表达不完整。应简化并明确表达未来计划。