Study— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，例如“to now”应为“for now”，“hunter job”应为“hunt for a job”。建议你练习使用正确的时态和词汇表达当前状态，并简洁明了地回答问题。

例: I am currently not working or studying because I graduated from university a few months ago. This year, I am taking a gap year to explore my interests before starting a career.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误，“thought”应为“studied”。此外，回答过于简短，缺乏细节。建议你直接回答问题并补充相关信息，使回答更完整。

例: I studied in Shanghai, which is a modern city known for its vibrant culture and advanced educational institutions.

提案: 句子结构不完整，表达不清晰，“them scales”应为“their skills”。建议你使用完整句子并具体说明为什么是一个好地方。

例: Yes, it is a great place to study because it offers many opportunities for young people to develop their skills and gain practical experience.

提案: 回答中语法和表达混乱，句子不连贯，信息不明确。建议你练习组织语言，使用连贯的句子表达具体的意见。

例: I would like the educational administration website to be improved because it often crashes. This makes it difficult to complete important tasks like course selection on time.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，如“vested in Thailand market”和“contention was two fails”不明确。建议你用简单明了的语言表达未来计划和原因。

例: I plan to pursue a master's degree in the future because I feel I need more knowledge and experience to succeed in the job market.

× I am neither of them to now.

✓ I am neither of them till now.

这里的 'to now' 应该是 'till now'，表示直到现在。'to now' 是错误的用法。

× And I didn't have any plans to hunter job.

✓ And I didn't have any plans to hunt for a job.

动词 'hunter' 是名词，正确的动词形式是 'hunt'，并且短语应为 'hunt for a job'。

× I thought it in Shanghai, which is a modern city.

✓ I studied in Shanghai, which is a modern city.

这里 'thought' 用错了，应该是 'studied'，表示学习。

× Yes, I have to say that a lot of chance for young people to develop them scales.

✓ Yes, I have to say that there are a lot of chances for young people to develop their skills.

'chance' 应该用复数 'chances'，'them scales' 应为 'their skills'，代词和名词搭配错误。

× Well, I don't like the educational administration website. Which always. Locks.

✓ Well, I don't like the educational administration website, which always locks up.

句子断裂，'Which always. Locks.' 不是完整句子，应合并为一个完整句子。

× But we need 2 years eat finish a lot of things like choosing cause choosing Dom tree.

✓ But we need 2 years to finish a lot of things like choosing courses and choosing dormitories.

'eat finish' 是错误搭配，应为 'to finish'，'cause' 应为 'courses'，'Dom tree' 应为 'dormitories'。

× Maybe I will plan for master degree.

✓ Maybe I will plan to pursue a master's degree.

'plan for master degree' 结构不正确，应为 'plan to pursue a master's degree'。

× Because now I don't have enough vested in Thailand market and the contention was two fails.

✓ Because now I don't have enough investment in the Thai market and the competition was too fierce.

'vested' 用错，应为 'investment'，'Thailand market' 应为 'Thai market'，'contention was two fails' 应为 'competition was too fierce'。