Study— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时应避免语法错误和不完整的句子，且表达应更自然流畅。可以直接说“Currently, I am a middle school chemistry teacher.”

例: Currently, I am a middle school chemistry teacher at Scion Middle School.

提案: 回答应更简洁，避免重复，并且注意语法准确。可以先直接回答“Previously, I studied at Northwest University for three years and earned a master's degree in translation.”

例: Previously, I studied at Northwest University for three years and earned a master's degree in translation.

提案: 回答时应注意句子结构，避免语法错误，使用连接词使表达更连贯。可以说“It's a very good place to study because we can use the library, find empty classrooms, or study in our dormitories.”

例: It's a very good place to study because we can use the library, find empty classrooms, or study in our dormitories.

提案: 回答应更清晰，语法更准确，且表达更自然。可以说“Yes, I think the university library should provide more lockers for students to store their personal belongings, as many students worry about losing their items when studying alone.”

例: Yes, I think the university library should provide more lockers for students to store their personal belongings, as many students worry about losing their items when studying alone.

提案: 回答应避免重复和语法错误，表达更简洁自然。可以说“I plan to retake the postgraduate exam to pursue a degree in psychology, and possibly a doctorate later, because I have a strong interest in this field.”

例: I plan to retake the postgraduate exam to pursue a degree in psychology, and possibly a doctorate later, because I have a strong interest in this field.

× And currently I am a middle school teacher and I teach chemistry in. Scion.

✓ Currently, I am a middle school teacher and I teach chemistry in Scion.

句子开头不应使用连词“and”，且“in. Scion”中句点位置错误，应为“in Scion”。建议去掉句首的“and”，并修正地名拼写。

× Like I said before, I am currently a teacher so I don't have a fixed place to study, but before I studied in the Northwest University for three years and got an A masters degree in translation.

✓ Like I said before, I am currently a teacher so I don't have a fixed place to study, but before I studied at Northwest University for three years and got a master's degree in translation.

“study in the Northwest University”应改为“study at Northwest University”，因为“study at”用于表示在某学校学习；“A masters degree”应为“a master's degree”，表示“硕士学位”，需加所有格。

× Yes, it is a very good place to study and because in university, in Northwest University, we can go to the library or find an empty classroom to study, an apart from that we can also study in our dorm.

✓ Yes, it is a very good place to study because at university, at Northwest University, we can go to the library or find an empty classroom to study, and apart from that we can also study in our dorm.

“in university”应改为“at university”，表示在大学；“an apart”应为“and apart”，是连词错误。

× Yes, I think in the library at the university can provide more closets or cabins for students to put their personal stuff because a lot of us, a lot of the students go to the library alone and concerning about missing stuff.

✓ Yes, I think the library at the university can provide more closets or cabins for students to put their personal stuff because a lot of us, a lot of the students, go to the library alone and are concerned about missing stuff.

“I think in the library at the university can provide”结构不正确，应去掉“in”；“concerning about”应改为“are concerned about”，正确表达“担心”。

× I'm planning to take the post graduate examination again and pursue a degree in psychology and maybe a doctors degree later in the future because I am I have strong interest in psychology field right now.

✓ I'm planning to take the postgraduate examination again and pursue a degree in psychology and maybe a doctor's degree later in the future because I have a strong interest in the psychology field right now.

“post graduate”应合写为“postgraduate”；“doctors degree”应为“doctor's degree”，需加所有格；“I am I have”重复，应删去多余部分；“strong interest in psychology field”前应加冠词“a”和“the”。