Study— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a direct and clear response with correct grammar. For example, say "I am currently working for a company, but I am preparing to become a student for my master's degree."

例: I am currently working for a company, but I am preparing to study for my master's degree soon.

提案: Your answer is confusing and lacks coherence. Use linking words and clear sentences to explain where and when you study. For example, "I usually study at home after work, but on Mondays when I have no work, I go to the library to study."

例: I usually study at home after finishing my work. However, on Mondays when I don't have work, I go to the library to study.

提案: Your answer is not very clear and has grammatical mistakes. Try to give a clear opinion and support it with reasons using linking words. For example, "Yes, the library is a good place to study because it is spacious and quiet. At home, I am often alone, so studying at the library is more comfortable."

例: Yes, the library is a good place to study because it is spacious and quiet. At home, I am usually alone, so I find it very nice to study there.

提案: Your answer is unclear and repetitive. Try to directly answer the question and provide specific suggestions if any. For example, "I like the quiet space, but I wish the library had more comfortable chairs and better lighting to help me study longer."

例: I like that the study place is very quiet, but I would like it to have more comfortable chairs and better lighting to improve my study experience.

提案: Your answer shows your intention but lacks clarity and correct grammar. Use linking words and organize your ideas clearly. For example, "I plan to study English every day because I need to get a high score in the IELTS test. I will focus on grammar, reading, writing, and speaking daily."

例: I plan to study English every day because I want to achieve a high score in the IELTS test. Therefore, I will practice grammar, reading, writing, and speaking every single day.

× Now I'm walking for every company and I'm preparing the masters so I will be student.

✓ Now I'm working for a company and I'm preparing for my master's, so I will be a student.

The verb 'walking' is incorrect here; it should be 'working' to indicate employment. 'Every company' is incorrect; 'a company' is appropriate. 'Preparing the masters' should be 'preparing for my master's' to indicate studying for a master's degree. Also, 'I will be student' needs the article 'a' before 'student'.

× Normally ice. To the at home after I finish my work. But on Monday I don't have any work, so I will. I'm gonna go. Go on a library for studying.

✓ Normally, I stay at home after I finish my work. But on Monday, I don't have any work, so I will go to the library to study.

The original sentence has unclear and incorrect prepositions and sentence fragments. 'Ice' is likely a mishearing or typo. 'To the at home' is incorrect; it should be 'stay at home'. 'Go on a library' should be 'go to the library'. The sentence structure is fragmented and needs to be combined for clarity.

× Yes, normally library is full space that we. To study and at home I'm always by myself so it was very nice to study.

✓ Yes, normally the library is a full space for us to study, and at home I'm always by myself, so it is very nice to study there.

'Library' needs the definite article 'the'. 'Full space that we' is incomplete; it should be 'a full space for us to study'. 'It was very nice' should be 'it is very nice' to maintain present tense consistency.

× Yes, the space is very quiet and then. I can study plenty of times because just bases. Very quiet and then I can study by myself.

✓ Yes, the space is very quiet, so I can study many times because it is very quiet, and I can study by myself.

The use of 'and then' is incorrect and causes sentence fragments. 'Plenty of times' is awkward; 'many times' or 'often' is better. 'Because just bases' is unclear and likely incorrect. The sentence needs to be restructured for clarity and correct conjunction use.

× Maybe I will study English everyday 'cause I need to get high score in IELTS test. So just aggregate grammar every day. Every single day. Reading, writing, speaking, all of them.

✓ Maybe I will study English every day because I need to get a high score in the IELTS test. So I will practice grammar every day, every single day, including reading, writing, and speaking.

'Everyday' should be two words 'every day' when meaning each day. 'Cause' is informal; 'because' is better. 'Get high score' needs an article: 'a high score'. 'Aggregate grammar' is incorrect; 'practice grammar' is appropriate. The sentence fragments need to be combined for clarity.