Study— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: حاول تحسين وضوح إجاباتك من خلال استخدام جمل كاملة ومنظمة بشكل أفضل. تجنب التكرار وركز على تقديم إجابة مباشرة مع تفاصيل داعمة واضحة.

例: I am currently a student at MTC College. I chose this college because it helps me improve my skills. In the future, I hope to get a good job related to my studies.

提案: حاول استخدام تراكيب لغوية أكثر دقة وتجنب الأخطاء النحوية. استخدم كلمات مناسبة وواضحة لتوضيح أفكارك بشكل أفضل.

例: I study at MTC College, which is a unique institution combining military and technical education. I find it interesting because it offers practical skills that help students find jobs after graduation.

提案: حاول ربط أفكارك باستخدام أدوات الربط لجعل إجابتك أكثر ترابطاً. كما يجب توضيح التفاصيل بشكل أفضل وتجنب التوقفات المفاجئة في الكلام.

例: Yes, it is a good place to study because it has many facilities and workshops. Students can fully learn hands-on skills and practice a lot to become familiar with practical work.

提案: حاول استخدام مفردات أكثر دقة وتصحيح بعض الأخطاء في النطق والكلمات. كما يمكنك توضيح أفكارك بشكل أكثر تنظيماً باستخدام أدوات الربط.

例: Yes, I would like some changes in my college. For example, adding IT communication boards would help students share information easily. Also, improving the seating arrangement would make the environment more comfortable for everyone.

提案: حاول تنظيم أفكارك بشكل أوضح وتجنب التكرار. قدم إجابة مباشرة مع تفاصيل محددة حول خططك المستقبلية.

例: I do not have specific study plans for the future yet. However, I hope to become a leader at a project center in my country after I finish my studies.

× Right and now I am student in MTC colleague that's calling find me, find my I found myself in this college because they help me to improve myself and.

✓ Right now, I am a student at MTC College. I found myself in this college because they help me to improve myself.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper structure, making it difficult to understand. It needs to be divided into clear, complete sentences with correct word order and articles.

× Right and now I am student in MTC colleague that's calling find me, find my I found myself in this college because they help me to improve myself and.

✓ Right now, I am a student at MTC College. I found myself in this college because they help me to improve myself.

The word 'student' requires the indefinite article 'a' before it. Also, 'colleague' is incorrect; the correct word is 'college'.

× In the future I will get, I will go to good job. As well as this.

✓ In the future, I will get a good job as well.

The phrase 'I will get, I will go to good job' is awkward and incorrect. The future tense should be used properly with articles and concise phrasing.

× I study at MTC colleague which is a unique. Instituition combining both military and technology technical education.

✓ I study at MTC College, which is a unique institution combining both military and technical education.

'Colleague' should be 'College'. 'Instituition' is misspelled as 'institution'. Also, 'technology technical education' is redundant; 'technical education' suffices.

× I find it very interesting because it overs practical skills and jad gob. Property is after graduation.

✓ I find it very interesting because it offers practical skills and job opportunities after graduation.

The sentence contains spelling errors ('overs' instead of 'offers', 'jad gob' instead of 'job') and unclear phrasing. It needs correction for clarity and grammar.

× Yes, because there are a lot of facilities and. Workshop tool. Study fully about the hand skills and practice more and more to be familiar with the. With the. With the practical.

✓ Yes, because there are a lot of facilities and workshop tools. We study hands-on skills fully and practice more and more to become familiar with practical work.

The original sentences are fragmented and incomplete. They need to be combined and rephrased for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Make any changes? Yes, I would like some chains in that place where I study.

✓ Make any changes? Yes, I would like some changes in the place where I study.

'Chains' is a misspelling of 'changes'. The preposition 'in' is correctly used here to indicate location.

× For example, it would be helpful to add IT communication boards so that colleagues can share information easily.

✓ For example, it would be helpful to add IT communication boards so that students can share information easily.

The word 'colleagues' is incorrect in this context; 'students' is more appropriate. The sentence structure is otherwise correct.

× In addition, improving their sitting arrangement would make the environment more convertible for everyone.

✓ In addition, improving the seating arrangement would make the environment more comfortable for everyone.

'Sitting arrangement' should be 'seating arrangement'. 'Convertible' is incorrect here; the correct adjective is 'comfortable'.

× Actually, there is no plan for the future. But I hope. I hope, I hope after finish, because right now I have.

✓ Actually, I have no plans for the future, but I hope that after finishing, I will...

The sentence is fragmented and uses incorrect tense and phrasing. It needs to be combined and corrected for proper present tense and clarity.

× I have planned for the. Be the leader for the project center in the my country. So that is not possible for me.

✓ I have planned to be the leader of the project center in my country, but that is not possible for me.

The original sentences are fragmented and contain unnecessary articles ('the my country'). They need to be combined and corrected for clarity and grammar.