Views— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: You should give a clear verbal response (yes or no) and then add one or two specific reasons or examples. Keep it concise (max 5 sentences) and use linking words like "because" or "so" to connect ideas.

例: Yes, I do enjoy taking pictures of different views because it helps me remember places and moods. For example, I often photograph city skylines at sunset and quiet rural fields in the morning to capture different lighting and atmosphere.

提案: State your preference directly (urban or rural) and support it with a clear reason and a brief comparison. Use linking phrases such as "because", "on the other hand" or "while" to structure your answer.

例: I prefer rural views because they are calmer and more natural, while urban views can be busy and noisy. For instance, I like photographing wide open fields and forests because they offer peaceful compositions and natural light.

提案: Avoid hesitations and answer directly. If you mean you prefer views in your own country, say so and give one or two specific reasons or an example. Use linking words like "because" and keep it to a couple of sentences.

例: I prefer views in my own country because I know the best spots and the seasons, so I can plan visits for great lighting. For example, I often return to a nearby coastal cliff at golden hour because it produces dramatic photos.

× MMM.

✓ Yes, I do.

The original response 'MMM.' is not a grammatical sentence and lacks a verb and clear meaning. This is a sentence structure error (ID 26). Provide a full affirmative sentence to answer the question: use the subject 'I' and the verb 'do' to form 'Yes, I do.' If you want to show hesitation, say 'Hmm, yes, I do.'

× MMM.

✓ I prefer views in both urban and rural areas, but I like rural views more.

Again 'MMM.' is not a grammatical response; it lacks a verb and clear structure (ID 26). Answer the comparative preference clearly with a subject and verb. Suitable forms are 'I prefer...' or 'I like...'. If you truly prefer one, state it: 'I prefer rural views' or 'I prefer urban views.'

× Or in other countries? Hmm, no.

✓ Do you mean views in other countries? No, I prefer views in my own country.

The short reply 'Or in other countries? Hmm, no.' is unclear and uses an elliptical fragment, causing a pronoun/reference issue (ID 12) and sentence structure problems. Clarify the question by restating it: 'Do you mean...' and answer fully with subject and verb. This removes ambiguity and provides a grammatically complete response.