Views— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 用词和语法需要修正，回答应更自然简练并包含主题句与1-2个具体细节。注意动词形式（e.g. 'like taking'，'make the composition look'），避免重复（如两次“I will”）。可以用衔接词简化逻辑，例如'also'或'so'。

例: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different scenes. I usually look for interesting angles and try to make the composition balanced, so the final picture looks pleasing. Also, I often wait for the right light to highlight the main subject.

提案: 语音错误与词汇使用不当（'euro areas','freshman'）需要改正。回答应先明确偏好，然后用1-2个具体原因支持，并用连接词（e.g. 'because','so','for example'）。注意语法（'there are trees and fields'）。

例: I prefer rural areas because they offer more natural and varied scenes. For example, trees, fields and rustic buildings create interesting textures and colours that make photos more attractive.

提案: 表达需更连贯并避免重复（如'I liked, I liked'，'give some difference'）。先给出明确立场，然后用具体原因支持，使用连接词如 'because' 或 'so'，并举例说明不同文化元素如何影响拍摄。

例: I prefer views in other countries because unfamiliar scenes inspire me. For instance, unique architecture and local customs often provide fresh subjects and colours that I wouldn't find at home.

× Sure, I'd definitely like to taking pictures from different views and I always choose the best angle and to make the picture structure looks perfect and then I will I will take the photo.

✓ Sure, I'd definitely like to take pictures from different views. I always choose the best angle to make the picture's composition look perfect, and then I will take the photo.

错误类型：动词后接 -ing 形式等问题。原因：短语 'would like' 后应接动词不定式 'to take' 而不是动名词 'taking'；'choose ... to make' 结构中应使用不定式 'to make'，而不是不定式与不定式混用；'picture structure looks' 中主谓搭配及名词所有格使用不当，应该用 'picture's composition look'（composition 作名词更自然），且 'look' 用原形以与主语复数或不可数一致。建议：记住常见结构： 'would like to + 动词原形'；使用 'choose to + 动词'；用所有格 'picture's' 或 'the composition of the picture'，并保持谓语动词与主语一致。

× Of course euro areas, because I think we take pictures in urban areas is too normal and can give people a sense of freshman. So I will always choose the rural areas which there has some trees and the plantation and I think that is beautiful in the picture.

✓ Of course rural areas, because I think taking pictures in urban areas is too ordinary and can give people a sense of sameness. So I always choose rural areas that have some trees and plantations, and I think those look beautiful in photos.

错误类型：介词和短语使用不当，以及词汇搭配错误。原因：原句 'euro areas' 应为 'rural areas'；'we take pictures in urban areas is too normal' 中多余主语和时态/结构错误，正确应为 'taking pictures in urban areas is too ordinary'；'a sense of freshman' 用词错误，应为 'a sense of sameness' 或 'monotony'；'which there has' 结构错误，应为 'that have'；'the plantation' 单复数与上下文不符，应为 'plantations'；最后 'beautiful in the picture' 更自然为 'beautiful in photos' 或 'look beautiful in photos'。建议：注意名词单复数和定语从句结构 'that/which + 主语 + 动词'；避免直译短语，选择更地道表达（ordinary, sameness, plantations）。

× In my opinion, I liked, I liked the views in other countries because I'm so familiar with our own country's view. And if I have the chance to travel abroad, I think the different cultural views will give some, uh, difference, give me some differences when I take the pictures.

✓ In my opinion, I like the views in other countries because I'm so familiar with my own country's scenery. If I have the chance to travel abroad, I think different cultural scenes will give me variety when I take pictures.

错误类型：现在时使用不当和重复表达。原因：句子开头使用 'I liked'（过去式）与随后内容不符，应使用一般现在时 'I like' 表示偏好；'our own country's view' 用词不自然，改为 'my own country's scenery' 更贴切；'give some, uh, difference, give me some differences' 重复且用词不当，改为 'give me variety' 或 'give me different perspectives' 更简洁自然；保持时态一致（一般现在时）以表达常态偏好。建议：描述常态或偏好时使用一般现在时，避免重复和不必要的填充词，使用更准确的名词（scenery, perspective, variety）。