Views— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Bạn trả lời trực tiếp và thể hiện sở thích rõ ràng, nhưng còn nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp (số ít/ nhiều, từ loại), ngắt nghỉ bằng tiếng nói (uh) làm giảm tính tự nhiên, và câu quá dài/ lặp ý. Hãy dùng cấu trúc ngắn gọn (1-2 câu), sửa lỗi như "different views", "sunrise or sunset at the sea or in the mountains", và tránh tiếng ồn bằng cách dùng liên từ hợp lý. Bổ sung một chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ một kỷ niệm hoặc cảm giác cụ thể) để phong phú câu trả lời.

例: Yes, I love taking photos of different views, especially sunrises and sunsets by the sea or in the mountains. Those scenes relax me a lot; for example, I remember watching a sunset on a quiet beach last summer that made me feel peaceful and inspired.

提案: Câu trả lời thiếu rõ ràng và mạch lạc, nhiều tiếng ngập ngừng (uh) và ngữ pháp sai (subject-verb agreement, danh từ số nhiều/ít). Bạn nên nêu quan điểm rõ ràng (urban or rural), sau đó nêu 1-2 lý do cụ thể với liên từ để kết nối ý. Tránh dùng từ không chính xác như "toll buildings" nếu ý là "tall buildings".

例: I prefer rural views because the countryside has wide open spaces and many large mountains. These natural landscapes offer peaceful scenery and cleaner air compared to the crowded, tall buildings in cities.

提案: Ý trả lời đã nêu nhưng rất lộn xộn, có nhiều ngắt quãng và lỗi ngữ pháp khiến người nghe khó hiểu. Bạn nên nói rõ lý do (e.g., variety of landscapes, cultural differences) và đưa ví dụ cụ thể, dùng liên từ để nối câu và tránh lặp từ như "I I". Giữ câu ngắn gọn và rõ ràng (2-3 câu).

例: I prefer views in other countries because they often offer different landscapes and cultural scenery that I haven't seen at home. For instance, I would love to visit Japan to photograph its cherry blossoms and historic temples.

× Yes I do, I really like taking pictures of different view, especially the sunrise or sunset of the sea or in the mountain because uh, the beaches is very stunning and I feel very comfortable and relaxed when I see it.

✓ Yes I do. I really like taking pictures of different views, especially the sunrise or sunset at the sea or in the mountains because the beaches are very stunning and I feel very comfortable and relaxed when I see them.

Several singular/plural mismatches: 'view' should be plural 'views' because 'pictures of different' implies multiple views; 'mountain' should be plural 'mountains' to match 'in the mountains'; 'beaches is' needs plural verb 'beaches are'; pronoun 'it' should be plural 'them' to refer back to 'beaches' or 'views'. Suggestion: check noun number agreement and ensure pronouns and verbs match singular/plural of their antecedents.

× I think what uh, because urban areas has many toll buildings, but in the rural areas had may have many, uh, big, uh, few and and uh, many big mountain.

✓ I think urban areas have many tall buildings, but rural areas may have many large and few mountains.

Preposition and other issues: remove unnecessary 'what' and 'because' duplication; 'in the rural areas had may have' is incorrect verb phrase—use 'rural areas may have'. 'toll' is wrong word; should be 'tall'. 'big mountain' should be plural 'mountains' to match 'many'. Also reworded to be grammatical and concise. Suggestion: use correct prepositions sparingly and ensure subject-verb structure is clear (subject 'urban areas' + plural verb 'have').

× I prefer views in other countries because when I look. All the countries in on the Internet I I feel very it's very beautiful and I really want to.

✓ I prefer views in other countries because when I look at pictures of countries on the Internet, I feel they are very beautiful and I really want to visit them.

Tense and sentence structure issues: 'when I look.' is a fragment; needs object 'at pictures' or 'at them'. 'All the countries in on the Internet' is incorrect preposition and word order—use 'pictures of countries on the Internet'. 'I I feel very it's very beautiful' is redundant and ungrammatical; use 'I feel they are very beautiful'. Final clause 'I really want to' is incomplete; add verb 'to visit them' to complete the thought. Suggestion: complete fragments by adding objects and verbs, avoid repetition, and keep present tense consistent for preferences.